Siheyuan: I Can’t Believe My Brother Is Silly Zhu

It's very imaginative, fast-paced, and well-conceived. If it doesn't falter in the later stages, it has the potential to become a masterpiece!

I've seen so many fanfictions about courtyard houses, and they're all so full of hostility. It feels like the world depicted in the TV dramas I watch and the fanfictions are completely different. I like the world the author creates; everyone has their own thoughts and feelings, and the words convey both the ordinariness and the helplessness of life.

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It's alright. However, this is more of a slice-of-life story. He Yushui doesn't seem to have much malice; otherwise, Xu Damao's scheme to save Yu Li, which actually harmed her, shouldn't have been so easily forgotten. After all, in those days, the consequences of such an event were significant; rumors could destroy lives. So, I'm not entirely satisfied with this aspect.

Does anyone know that "Under the Zhengyang Gate," "Little Woman," and "The Courtyard" are from the same world? I had almost forgotten about them, but recently I rewatched "Little Woman," and Cai Quanwu said something along the lines of, "Qin Huairu and Sha Zhu are too old to walk and have no one to take care of them. I also saw Han Chunming pushing Su Meng in a wheelchair." That's the gist of it.

Up to Chapter 52, when Rainwater is kidnapped, the creative New Year's theme showcases intellectual struggle and defense, but lacks physical self-protection and ambush. It wouldn't be appropriate to reveal these aspects only after the fact, as that would seem abrupt. It would be more reasonable to lose a few pieces during Rainwater's growth.

I'll give myself a pat on the back first. Writing this many words for a book must have taken a lot of effort. Only while writing did I realize how difficult it is to persevere and finish a book. So, keep going! The future will definitely be better!

The storyline is captivating, and the writing is fluent and delicate.

I think it's wonderful.

This is the first time I've seen something written about rainwater; it encourages innovation, five stars.