The Sequel to Reading Fate

Good, it makes up for the previous regrets. Here are some personal suggestions: I think you could write more sweet scenes between Li Xiuwen and Qingyue, or Li Xiuwen teasing Qingyue, something funny. After all they've been through, they deserve some happiness and a better life. Also, the protagonist doesn't have to be so busy; the pacing could be slower, with more focus on their daily lives.

The author writes very well, and the content overlaps with the original story. In the previous chapter, Qingyue was aloof, and I hope the author will restore some of her personality. I also hope the content won't be too complicated, as it's becoming a bit difficult to understand. Overall, it's very well written. 🥰😘❤️

It's very well written! I hope the author updates frequently and gets enough rest. Five stars! I really like it! 😘

This makes up for a regret I've had for many years. Thank you, author, for giving me the opportunity to continue being an observer. However, Qingyue's personality has changed a lot, as has Li Xiuwen's. Although it's not a major issue, I still hope the author can continue to create works based on the majority of original content. Thank you, author.

Could you use fewer internet slang terms? 😅 Li Xiuwen's final tribulation during his immortal tribulation was really hard to watch.

This sequel is acceptable.

Awesome! Hahaha

I hope the author will continue updating.

Li Xiuwen's writing was even more laborious than the writing of Li Xiuwen by Jiu Pin.

I feel the sequel wasn't as well-written as the first one, but it's still alright. I'll give it five stars...