Genshin Impact: The Immortal Physician of Liyue in the Age of the Archons

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos. I suggest you read it carefully next time after writing. It can be seen that the author has 26 keys, and it is easy to get distracted when typing. It's a lot better later, there aren't so many typos.

There are so many things in this world that are powerless, such as maths that cannot be learned, endless vocabulary that cannot be memorized, weight that cannot be lost, wallets that cannot be filled, and you that are not updated.

The writing is very good, I originally wanted to give it five stars. But Sister Ping's regret makes me feel pity, so I can only give you four stars. But if the author gives Sister Ping a title in the future, I will add five stars. Let me beg the author for help! [Cry][cry]

So far it's okay, but there should be more storylines related to the Demon God during the Demon God period. All in all, keep going [laughing] @ Really Want to Be a Salted Fish

Changsheng, hey hey, Changsheng is so cute Author, you must persevere and finish writing. Don't stop. Just promise me, okay? .

How to say? It feels like it has a lot of potential! It's just that the plot feels a bit too routine. Author, let's talk about your current plot here. What you wrote at the beginning was pretty good, but look at what you write now. You have added too many emotional scenes now, and the description of the environment is not consistent. For example, in the few pictures you wrote recently, temple fairs and the like, it stands to reason that Gu Liyue should not have had these festivals in the past. After all, the Sea Lantern Festival was only founded after the Demon God War. Also, the direction of your plot is unreasonable. There are too many self-created plots. It should be written according to the historical trend in Genshin Impact. Author, if you continue writing like this, I'm pretty sure your book will be out of date soon. Author, you have only two choices now. One, continue writing like this, then this book will definitely become popular. Second, put aside some self-created plots or unreasonable settings, start the real main plot directly, and slowly advance. Only in this way can there be a glimmer of hope. When the book is almost finished, I will delete and correct some unreasonable chapters in the past. Basically this book is stable. How to do it depends on your own choice. @Really want to be a salted fish

The writing is pretty good, but the character design of Grandma Ping is broken. The character is too arrogant and domineering. I hope the author can improve it. Also, why did the Yang Xiu book have to be updated? I really hope the author resumes updating. There are some small knives in the article. Don't worry about it. The writing is not very sharp.

The writing is good, I hope the heroine will live forever (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

I didn't forget to give it five stars, I gave it, and now I highly recommend this book as a beautiful book. Everyone will be impressed by it once they read it. I hope the author can write the protagonist in a decent way. He should be too strong and not too weak, right?

Nice! Please give me more support from the author, don't give up. Come on, come on, come on, come on