I Only Wanted to Slack Off, but Somehow Started Building Reincarnation

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking novel about cultivating immortals. I strongly support it. Although there are some shortcomings in the emotional connection of the description, it is really enjoyable to read. Putting aside some minor flaws, it is a perfect novel for me so far. I hope the author will continue to work hard (in addition, the character's personality is actually very good) Yes, the male protagonist has been in a period of depression for ten years, and the ten years that the female protagonist has been with him are not written in detail. It is a bit regretful for someone like me who likes to watch fantasy romances, but a brief introduction also promotes the development of the plot. In addition, is the third brother's recent appearance scenes a bit sparse? []) Come on (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It's good to read. After searching for a long time, I finally found another book that I can read [laughing] No system, no depression. I don't want to be a tomato. Most fantasy either has no brain system, or fights all the time and is well written [face covering]. The pace is slow, but the time is a bit messy. The emotional aspect is naturally soft. The combat aspect is relatively streamlined and there are not so many breakthroughs in battle.

It's less of a complaint and more of a middle-class one. It has a unique clarity and a rare calmness. Although it lacks a bit of passion, it still has the same artistic conception. There is no such thing as being difficult to express. Unfortunately, it is too monotonous and a bit forced to be honest. Hu Duzi is subtle and not too forceful, but it is very traditional!

This is probably my first book review. I read it for a while and only read a few chapters. The plot does not have many ups and downs, the pace is relatively gentle, no poisonous points have been found so far, and the protagonist's IQ is online. There are still few characters that I have come into contact with now. I will come back to review after reading the rest of it, and I hope it will continue to be good. Also, the author should be a newcomer. Don't look at it. There seem to be very few people reading it now. It will get better. Come on [makes a face]

It's not bad, but it has the feeling of a young boy with a middle school disease cultivating immortality, and the plot doesn't have a sense of immersion. In terms of the characters' language, it always feels like a group of children talking. In reality, I would never have imagined that there would be so many middle school students. But it is still a good book, after all, most novels are like this.

Detailed content, worth reading [Inquiry] But the relationship develops too fast, which is very uncomfortable. The development of the plot is also too vague and lacks coherence. Even if it is spliced ​​together later, there will be no pleasure of "that's how it is", but what the hell! [Marked] Does the world revolve around the male protagonist? This feeling of powerlessness [covering face] [Face covering] Character communication is too formal, either in a few words or explained in detail. There are too many supporting characters and the exchanges are very brief. There is also a heroine who rarely speaks even when she is present. Most of her appearances are to prove that there is no heroine. [Marked] The heroine is like an empty shell. She gets along with other girls inexplicably. The description is not as spiritual as the supporting characters😅 [Staring] I just want to say that anyone can write their emotions lightly, but not the heroine; communication can be brief with anyone, but not with the heroine; interaction with anyone can be minimal, but not the heroine; and anyone can be left out in the cold, but not the heroine. Not to mention having the heroine stand there as a foil [punch out] [Chigua] The content of the book is very good, but the emotion is too painful to write. I'm not here to read the script, [stop] I need emotional drama to fill my empty soul. Novels should be smart stories, not rigid records

To be honest, the narrative of each chapter of this book is actually not very continuous. As you read it, you may feel a little uncomfortable, or you don't quite understand it, but each chapter contains a young man's unique yearning for cultivating immortality and a passion for immortality. It also has logic and ideas, and is not just random writing. In the process of cultivating immortality, the things, objects and people we encounter all have basic principles that conform to our understanding, rather than the so-called: This is not scientific, but it is very spiritual. It's a truly good book. I hope the author can continue to create more miracles. That's all. Here's one sentence: This is the inherent pride of the book writer, and it is the beautiful imagination of us scholars about cultivating immortals!

The author's writing style is very steady, and I haven't found any mistakes so far. It is very relaxing to watch the whole process, and I feel comfortable both physically and mentally. The CPs are also very well written. I love the female protagonist's natural and silly personality, and the male protagonist is also a strict henwife. Ha ha. The overall plot seems to be quite smooth, with no lags or inexplicable extensions. There is no abuse in the whole story. This is a novel suitable for long-term reading during a book shortage.

It's very good, but sometimes the emotional connection between the characters is not very good, but you can throw away a little "brain" and don't think too deeply. It's a really good book. I've only read about 20 of it now. I feel like the heroine's setting is very good. I post a comment in advance in the hope that the author can do better There are a lot of things I want to praise, I don't want to say more, it's good

I feel that based on the character and combat power created by the author, it is better to use urban martial arts as the background to describe the story. It is a daily novel, where a few brothers bicker and chat, and the protagonist is having a date. It is very warm. Some people say that the protagonist is a dog licker. What I want to say is that any behavior towards a girl he likes is a dog licker. No, a person who kneels down and licks another person without dignity. In a relationship between the sexes, he knows that the other person does not like him, and yet he repeatedly puts his hot face on the cold butt without any dignity or bottom line. People, in a more straightforward and vulgar way, we can understand it as a kind of slut. This kind of behavior is called dog licking. I don't know if it's the Dragon King protagonist who has seen too many women kneeling down and licking his wife with a wave of his hand or something. How can this normal, responsive behavior of showing love to a girl be called dog licking? Generally speaking, as a new author, this book has many good points and some bad points, but it does not hinder reading. Good luck, author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Also, author, I suggest you change the cover to a more attractive one. After all, when I first saw the cover, I felt it was very casual, so I couldn't help but think that the content is also bad. The author suppressed the early combat power too much, so slowly, without sufficient word count and outline, the later combat power will easily collapse, so it would be better to use urban, spiritual energy recovery and the like.