The Retired Big Shot Is Back on the Job

Self-evaluate and encourage yourself

This is a love-and-kill type, which is not bad, but it is a bit messy in some places, especially in the early stage. I sometimes feel that the plot is a bit inexplicable, but it will be much better later on, and it will not be as vague as some places in the early stage. Overall, it's really good. This kind of true love and killing is really good-looking. It's much better to do the cookie thing with those who do it in the name of falling in love and killing each other, because I don't like to be deceived. At present, the young couple feels that someone has some feelings for someone, but not much. The progress is from lovers to lovers, which is good. Overall, this book is pretty good to read, but the number of chapters is a bit short now.

Second rating: At present, I personally think that the writing is good, and the reading process is not awkward. I think the character design is quite interesting. I hope the author will write according to the given character design and not collapse (it would be a pity if it collapsed); It would not be fun to turn the interaction between the protagonists into a streamlined template (referring to ignoring the character and writing emotional lines, etc.). The author must make sure that the protagonist is not a good person (can it be understood this way?) To the end. This is why I read the article. Fortunately, there are no popular settings (more than half of what I have seen have this flaw) where the bad guy and the villain are not good people. It is used to promote the emotional line of the plot or is just a gimmick, etc. "Although I am not a good person, but I can't help others and save people. Otherwise, what kind of person is that?" Or "The protagonist (villain) has bad outlook, but lacks love, is easily redeemed, and then gives up his goal and becomes a good person." It makes me wonder if there are any articles that describe the setting of the bad person who is not a good person. Finally, I would like to give some small suggestions. When describing, you can expand it depending on the situation to make the plot more coherent, because sometimes the plot is a bit jumpy and scattered (but not much, and it doesn't have much impact. Come on, author) The above is an impromptu review based on personal opinions, for viewing only.

It's quite good, but I have a question, why are so few people reading good books?

The plot is interesting and the setting is good, but some of it is incomprehensible. The article jumps too fast and the details are all left to the reader's imagination. I feel that this writing method is more suitable for comics. Although it is a good book, it is really difficult to read. This kind of character setting is very good and I really don't want to give up. I hope the author will work hard!

The protagonist is well portrayed and has a very attractive personality. He is a bad childish psycho who likes to have fun and loves to act, but he retains a certain persistence. CP belongs to the type of falling in love and killing each other, and their aggression is quite crazy. I like to see them hugging each other. They are a pair with different age differences, height differences, and body shapes. The setting is quite interesting, and the abilities are quite interesting. If I have to say a problem, maybe the plot is a bit fragmented. When I watched it, I didn't feel that this was a problem, but when I look back on it, I feel that it was a little bit here and there, and the ending was a bit delayed, or it was not finished at all. . . Ah ah ah, please come back!

Better than at least 90% of Tomato authors, some Shuangnan novels are just interesting in setting, and you start to pretend to be 13 when you click on the article, or there is an inexplicable plot that you can't watch at all, so you can only leave it to ash. This article by the author is quite good, the introduction is novel, the plot must have plot, the emotional line must have emotional line, the protagonist is not brainless, and he does not pretend to be a cup of tea and does not seek death. It is a unique article

The protagonists are two madmen, the plot is interesting, and a good book will not be easily buried. Being recommended shows that it has its merits.

Love it [Admiration] It's really beautiful! [Love][love]

It looks good, but maybe I didn't understand it. I felt like it was a little too jumpy in some places. But I like it!