The White Moonlight Eloped with the Villainous Substitute!

Teacher must keep writing [crying] I haven't seen such a masterpiece in a long time since the book shortage. . . I love you so much. . It feels good to show me today, I will wait for the update, I love you! !

Yes, it's a story-telling plot. Xiao Jiu gave me the feeling that "the flowers in Luoyang are blooming in humanity, but it's not spring when I come". For the three little Cui Zhangchen, there is a sense of vicissitudes of "the ruthless willows in Taicheng are still the smoke cage ten miles away", and they are forced to grow up T^T (My own opinion, I like it.) The author, please do a lot to update it ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ

It's beautiful... The writing and Che Che are super good, but I can't accept the use of the emotional line... After all, Yan got everything he wanted, and Shen lost some because of him... But Yan also protected it very well while using it. It's just that I can't accept being used and forgiven again and again

The writing is very good and the characters are well developed. You can come in and take a look. Everyone [Like]

The author's writing style is very logical. This article is generally good, but I always feel a little frustrated at the end. I feel that the author has not grasped the characters of the two protagonists in the latter part, and the characters are not so full. I feel that Shen has been compromising and wronging himself. Although Pei is indeed very pitiful and miserable, this is not the reason why he has been planning to use Shen and want others to love him and not leave him. But the crazy criticism makes me feel sad when I look at it. Haha, Shen really has no temper, no. It was enough to pull, (imagine if Shen had been more stubborn, Pei would have become crazier [laughing evilly]), and the ending ended like this. He didn't retaliate at all, but Pei's psychology was hurt, but I didn't think it was enough [laughing and crying]. If you are controlled at this point, I don't mind watching it. And I feel that Shen has not grown up much. What he has experienced is that he has been pushed to make helpless choices. There is a feeling of drifting with the crowd, not loving completely and hating incompletely. In comparison, I can feel the charm of the character from Cui Shaoxuan, a young boy. Shen is described by the author as very charming, but I can't feel his personal characteristics for the time being. I'm just writing a review. I don't mean to offend the author in any way. The author is great. Come on!

Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking

I liked him a lot in the early stage, but later on... I hope Shou can be stronger and smarter. I really don't think he can be so kind after so much experience. He can be so easy to be soft-hearted, and Gong uses and loves at the same time. The latter part is quite crazy, but Qiuqiu Shou has a firmer heart. Why is it so easy to be soft-hearted towards him?

Overall, the writing is delicate. Both the characters and the storyline are reasonable and unexpected. The author's early foreshadowing is very tempting. One lacks emotion, the other is lively, redemptive, and sober. People change, and Pei Qingyan is not wrong, but I hope Shen Zhiyu will still be a young man when he returns.

Bao, I feel that the final setting and the ending of the next book are a bit hasty and a bit uncomfortable. But I had a lot of fun watching it and stayed up until 4 o'clock to read it (thank you (the writing is very cute). 1 Is also my favorite... And the cannon fodder 1 from my hometown who has a crush on 0 is also very cute... Looking forward to the next book...!!

It's really beautiful. How come the rating is so low? [Crying]