After Marrying Gong Yuanzhi, I Betrayed Him

Come on! It's good to watch, the plot is reasonable, and the interaction between the heroine and Yuanzheng's brother is sweet and joyful. The funniest thing is that no one believes that the heroine is Wu Feng, and all the Wu Feng think that the heroine is very thoughtful [snicker][snicker][smirk]. The setting is great!

It's so good-looking and super funny. I really like Yuanzheng brother. Please update more soon.

The content is very good, but I personally feel that it is just my personal feeling. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It is a bit inconsistent with the emotions of Gong Yuanzheng's character. In the play, Gong Yuanzheng is very cold and ruthless, and he is a career writer. I think that he blushes just after meeting the heroine, which is not consistent with his crazily criticizing little poisonous children. I think it can be done step by step, (I personally feel a bit love-minded), but it does look better. I hope that the author can write more character stories based on the psychology and image of the characters in the original works and TV series. Author, your fanfic that is more suitable for Tian Jiarui will be more attractive (sincere suggestions [love] [love] [love])

I couldn't bear to watch it until halfway through. Zundu is so beautiful. I hope the author can write more. It feels very harmonious and the heroine is very powerful at key moments. I haven't watched the original drama, but anyway, this author's writing is very interesting... (Forgive me for being a little uneducated) [Awkward laugh]

It's good-looking, the plot is compact, and there are no embarrassing scenes.

It's good to read. I really like the interaction between Brother Yuanzheng and Su Xiaowan. It's so sweet. Also, this book is super funny and I can't seem to stop reading it.

It's well written. I hope it doesn't break down. The heroine's character is very cute and the plot is also very good. It can be written so well without breaking the original plot. The author's writing is good. Come on.

Let's talk about your feelings about this book. Just from the perspective of feeling sorry for Gong San when watching the drama, the Su Wanwan in this book is happy. It is Gong San's redemption and makes up for Gong San's regret of not having a CP. It is also very sweet. I love reading it! But looking at the book as a whole, it is necessary to write about Gong San's love, but there is no need to overshadow the original heroine and the second heroine. The Su Xiaowan in this book is portrayed as a silly sweet girl who only masters the script and suppresses Asawa Shirt's Mary Su. The plot is a bit disgusting and uncomfortable to watch. If you write about Gong San, you also write about the love between Gong Er and Miss Blade, and make everyone independent and bright, which will make this book more popular! Instead of letting the protagonist of the original plot attach to this created heroine and rely on pulling and stepping to set it off, this is unnecessary. However, since it is the first time for the author to write, he may not know much about the drama Yun Zhiyu, so it is still very interesting as a story about someone who likes Gong San. Good luck, author! I hope your article can give more attention to supporting characters!

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It's good-looking and very sweet. Although it's a bit OOC, it's very good-looking. It's so sweet to me.