God of War Who Guards the Nation: One Man Defends China, Unmatched Under Heaven

Generally speaking, it is too easy to deviate from the original Siheyuan plot world by mutating superpowers based on the Siheyuan era background. The Siheyuan is the ordinary trivial matters of daily life. Whether it is this book or the books that travel to the Siheyuan and escape again, once you leave the Siheyuan, you feel that you have lost the essence of the Siheyuan books and the essence of life. This kind of book with all superpowers doesn't feel suitable for the world of Siheyuan. You can write about martial arts, apocalypse, etc. Moreover, the scene in this book where the meteorite can bring about the awakening of superpowers is too ordinary. The macro setting does not create the immersive feeling of the macro scene, and the level is average. . .

Within a few chapters, he was discovered to have joined the superpower group. Why did you write this? Is it interesting?

I don't like silly pig sticks, but these people have superpowers. It would be great if the pig's feet deprive others of their superpowers.

I thought I was copying other people's cooking skills and benchwork knowledge and skills, but it turned out...

The subject matter is not good Writing is not good Not very engaging