Something's Not Quite Right About My Female Disciples

Not bad, but the author is too short. Also drive slower, haste makes waste. After all, the car next door is overturned, so you have to take it easy. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Three apprentices? I think it's three succubi! [Sinister smile]

This book continues the story of the book where the author was banned [laughter]

This is what a real time traveler should do, not a eunuch [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Good! I have another bag of electronic mustard!

It's so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable, super uncomfortable. I always knew that as long as one apprentice succeeds, the remaining two will succeed immediately, and then it will be the finale. Ahhhhhhh, it's so uncomfortable, but if we are not together, we will always be ambiguous. Even if I win anyone else, I feel sorry for the female apprentice. They were obviously the first. I cried fainting. I feel like this book will be over after a hundred chapters, woo woo woo woo

The people in the novel are all flesh and blood, with feelings and desires. This novel took me to a whole new world [learned] [learned] to challenge masters and rebel against disciples [think]. The characters were lifelike and the story plot was full of ups and downs, making it hard to put down. The author's description of psychological activities is particularly good, making me feel as if I was actually there, feeling the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the protagonist. Highly recommended to friends who like reading. The author is also very successful in portraying characters. Each character has a unique personality and characteristics that are impressive. ,,,, Oooooooooooo So I took her to the hospital, lined up, registered, and had a consultation. . . After struggling all afternoon. Finally the doctor told me to ask her to go back and drink more hot water... What happened?

Judging from the quality alone, the frequency of words such as charming body, charming voice, pretty face, etc. Is too high and sometimes makes it a bit awkward to read. The writing style needs to be improved, but from a personal point of view, I don't want to care about this anymore. Come on, the author [Top post][Top post]

The car, it was such a fast car, it almost threw me off [laughing evilly]

There is nothing particularly poisonous, only a few minor poisons are dispensable. The male protagonist's character is also good. At least he did not fool the female protagonist into saying something for their own good. There are no very embarrassing parts in the sentences. Although there are flaws, it is considered good among Tomatoes. I have been thinking about whether to give it four stars or five stars. Because it is relatively short and has some minor flaws, I want to give it four stars. However, I feel that this is unfair, because this book has just been published and it is a bit shorter. The flaws are much better than other Tomato books, so after thinking about it, I will give it five stars. Let's see how this book goes in the later stages. If it can be written with this quality, it will be pretty good. Also, the heroine is almost enough. It is best not to exceed 10. More than ten in the later stage will easily miss the heroine, and some heroines will appear once for a long time, which is not good.