Naruto: I Livestreamed a Head-Patting Mobile Game to the Ninja World

Everything else is fine, but there are too many words in the narration. Can there be more high-level battles?

Give the ninja world a little head touch and shock [full]

The writing is interesting, but the digressions torture the readers too much, so I give it four stars. Sorry, I looked at the next few pictures. They are too outrageous. Two-thirds of them are irrelevant to the content. It's really embarrassing.

Encourage me, come on

I feel that the subject matter is very good, but there are too many narrations and dramas. I need to play more popular ninjas, so more people will watch it. Come on! [Punch hard]

Friends who have never had a red stone, please pay attention. There is a great opportunity now, don't miss it

It's very good. The early writing is particularly good. The writing about the Hadron anchor is not too abrupt. It's just that the part about Obito in the back is a bit disappointing. I feel that the combat power in the early stage is directly transferred to Kaguya. Black Zetsu can actually explode in the later stage. I kind of expect Obito to fight with everyone. After all, I only watched it because of Obito. I hope the author will work hard. One more thing, I could actually add a little more plot about Naruto and Sasuke. After all, it is the main plot. Instead, I would describe too much about other people, which is actually not good. After all, Itachi went straight to Madara's resurrection after reading it, and there was almost nothing left to write about. He put Obito last, and the fight between Izuna and Minato was too OOC, which was quite baffling. However, the anchor of Qiangzi wrote it very well. It laid the groundwork at the beginning and made people accept it. It did not write about Qiangzi's discovery of the truth of the live broadcast. It was also very good. Also, the interaction between Qiangzi and Tiantian in the early stage was too friendly. However, the duel scene is also very well written. No matter which battle is described, the psychological description and the behavior of the characters are all very good. However, I still wish there was more plot. After all, I am a little tired after watching too many battles. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard on writing

It's good, but it would be best to reduce the narration, and the host should talk less about irrelevant things, and if it's important, that's fine. I just hope it won't be too dramatic, otherwise it will feel inconsistent. And actually, I have been looking forward to stamping my feet and taking Hashirama with him in a set, and then there happens to be that emoticon, Hashirama's face must survive if he survives [smirk] Then the second person I look forward to is Obito, and he will hurt you with a slap of his little hand, you guessed it, Monata is so handsome.

It's okay. It's just that it was a bit boring when I watched it, and the pace was a little slow. You should already know some common sense written by the author, so it's a bit boring to watch. It's suitable for new players who have just played this game. I've only watched this little bit so far. I don't know if it will get better in the future.

More updates, I hope there will be Easter eggs for Arrancar Obito, Kakashi, and White Mask. The first part is okay, but the second part is getting more and more confusing.