The Beauty Is Irresistibly Alluring, Bewitching the Vampire Lord

I'm just telling you how I feel The plot of the story is actually okay, and the author is trying his best to make the plot as rational as possible. And this kind of character design is actually very good. If it is written more fully, it will be very good. It can be seen that the author is very careful (it feels like the author treats the protagonist as an OC) However, both the writing style and settings are a bit raw and immature. I feel that the author is still a novice and needs to polish his skills. It will be much better accepted by new readers, but if you are an old bookworm, you won't be too interested in this kind of writing [face covering] (The following suggestions are for the author) In fact, you can try to modify the setting and plot to make them look more mature, and pay attention to the fullness and versatility of the characters. The most important thing is the sense of immersion or appeal that the text gives readers, which is still lacking here. Anyway, cheers up

Ah, no, I'm so beautiful, no one noticed that I want to be a fan.

I don't know what to say, but it looks good! Very very highly recommended! ! !

Personally, I think it's very good-looking. I feel that in the early stage of the attack, I was restrained towards Xiao Suli. I would not suck his blood or... Without Xiao Suli's consent... In the middle stage, they have experienced life and death, so the relationship aspect is much better. There were misunderstandings and disagreements at a later stage. The more ruthless you are in the later stage, the greater the contrast will be after the misunderstanding is resolved. (Our little Su Li also suffered some injuries in the later stage, which was shocking) In the end, the contract was made and the wedding was held. Shangli99. There is also a deputy cp, recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended

The setting is very novel and the creation of each character is complete. I recommend everyone to watch [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I haven't seen enough, it's over [smile]

It's very interesting. I like the setting of the protagonist. Vampires and humans are my favorite themes. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰It just ended a bit suddenly.

Really super pretty

Super pretty! ! ! The writing is so good that it's not enough to read! I really like Su Li. The plot is very special. This is the best vampire book I have ever read. When I read the introduction, I thought it was not that good, but in fact the content of the book is really very interesting. You must try it and don't be fooled by the introduction! Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Very nice, but I don't understand why the rating is not high