The Lord God's Apostle Across the Heavens

I remember that I was amazed when I first read the novel about the main temple. Now it's time to write it myself. If there are any bad or wrong things, feel free to point them out. The author is online all day long [smile] [smile]

Give me 5⭐. Good idea but many shortcomings. Let me tell you my opinion. Our core is unlimited flow➕cultivation, right? Don't put the cart before the horse. It's not necessary. First, our core world is the world of cultivating immortals, right? It's still about cultivating immortals. If our book is finished with 1000 chapters. Unlimited streaming. It can occupy up to 300 chapters. Otherwise, it would be better if you just write unlimited flow. The second is that we have unlimited flow. If we take the path of mortals cultivating immortals, it is no longer necessary and we might as well write novels about cultivating immortals. Right. At this time, something must be written. Come up with something new. Talisman is the most common among the various arts of cultivating immortals. Can we change this. For example, the fireball symbol, 4 exploding fireballs. Wind Blade Talisman, 5 pieces, small tornado. Water Sword Talisman, 9 small waterfalls. Make the symbols look like cards or playing cards. For weapon refining, it is even more questionable whether it is possible to combine it with the game to make a set. I want Douluo to be his natal weapon in life. Or weapon and soul training. Make a Zanpakutō. Etc. This book still follows the same old path. That is, it is gone. There are too many people writing books now. Writing a book with a score of 60 to 80 points is meaningless and drowning. Might as well go out of your own way. After doing it, no matter what world you borrow, you hope to have something original. Give examples. Let's add a Zanpakutō. Just an original one. With formation. Swastika is a monk's formation routine. It's fate to go back. Come on! Hope it works.