I’m Really Just a Weak Heroic Spirit

No matter how small the origin of the protagonist's five elements is, you have to give him an endless stream. The five elements are mutually reinforcing and restraining each other, and they are endless. The mutual generation means that the energy will not decrease. In fact, the longer the time, the more energy the five elements produce.

Although these words are shocking, the writing style of this book is not very good, and there are many poisonous points... First, the writing itself is like a running account, the paragraphs are not divided well, and it feels like reading a composition... Second, although it is a fanfic, you can really save as much as you can on various character details and settings. Basically, the characters are mentioned in one paragraph, including the plot. It feels like the protagonist has spoken, used skills, and it's done, and gone... Third, I don't understand why you added a time traveler in addition to the protagonist? To better modify the original plot? It's totally unnecessary I haven't read the rest, but I still want to say that a novel is not a composition. There is no need to write it in a natural paragraph. The characters and details should be expressed. Don't summarize it in one sentence.

Big cheers for the author

Pure running account.

The details are not good enough, give it 4 points