Online Game: I'm the Only Closed-Beta Player

Without any prior setup, adding a chapter before the first chapter to briefly introduce the protagonist's 15 years of dreaming would make the novel more concrete.

It's very well written! Some people like games, some like plot. Those who like games will care about game data and will follow the calculations. Those who like plot can skip the data; it won't affect them. As for the plot, some people like the male lead to be the only one, some like many women to like the male lead, and some like one female lead. You can't please everyone.

A timid and submissive person, someone who's already invincible, watched someone get stabbed and nearly died because of him without doing anything, just to advance the plot, right? He certainly wasn't blinded by hatred, and he was indeed very law-abiding, a good citizen.

The pain is like being bitten by a fierce dog; the alertness is like a red fox's sudden attack; the crushing force is like a giant bear sweeping across; the restraint is like an eagle hunting its prey; the approach is like a tiger leaping; the despair is like a circling vulture; the vigilance is like a lurking crocodile; the danger is like a bull charging; the lethality is like a giant crocodile…

A game writer whose talent was wasted on novels. Honestly, this is the first time I've seen something like this, it's really good. The plot is also good. If you don't want to see the equipment details, you can skip it, because some people still enjoy reading it.

Aside from the slow updates, everything else is fine. Other games are invincible from start to finish, but this one has its peaks and troughs, which is pretty good.

This is a very promising book, but it has two major flaws in the early stages that have deterred many readers. The pacing feels a bit slow; it's already at 200 chapters and has only been running for a little over ten days. The alien Tianxing Group and the First and Second Universes create a huge plot hole, and I wonder how the author will handle it 🤔 Ideally, it should have no female lead, or…

We strongly urge the author to specify the source of the equipment images: "Which game do they come from?"

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Keep going, just be yourself. Don't dwell on those who don't like you. Focus on the majority who like you, not the few who gave you bad reviews because they didn't want to watch.