Online Game: I'm the Only Closed-Beta Player

There is no foreshadowing in the front. You can add a chapter before the first chapter to briefly introduce the protagonist's 15 years of dreaming, which can make the novel more specific.

It's very well written. Some people like games, and some people like plots. Those who like games will care about the game data and will follow the calculations. Those who like plots can skip the data, and it won't affect it. As for the plot, some people like the male protagonist to be beautiful alone, some like many women to like the male protagonist, and some like one female protagonist. It's hard to agree with everyone. Just write according to your ideas, don't keep changing it. If you change it, there will still be people who can find out the faults. Tomorrow there will be 5 and 8 updates, which are the most important. I like to read it. Don't update less for the sake of some good readers. I saw some comments in the comment area are still the authors. They scold you for bad data. Come on, update according to your own ideas! Update 5 tomorrow, update 8! Once the data is good, we must persist. We should not change it again and again for the sake of some sophisticated readers, and update it very little every day.

A submissive, already invincible person who watched others almost die because he was stabbed without taking any action, just to promote the plot, right? He is indeed not blinded by hatred, and he is indeed law-abiding and a good citizen.

Pain like a vicious dog bite A sense of alertness like a red fox pouncing A crushing feeling like a giant bear sweeping across A sense of restraint like an eagle hunting prey A sense of imminence like a spotted tiger leaping A feeling of despair like a circling vulture A sense of alertness like a crocodile lurking A sense of danger like a buffalo charging A fatal feeling like a giant crocodile rolling A sense of intimidation like the roar of a silver wolf A thrilling feeling like a sandworm ambush A feeling of impact like the impact of a stone lion A feeling of entrapment like the claws of a giant crab A clamping feeling like a firefox staring at you A trembling sensation like a snow ape jumping As tense as a wild goose chasing A sense of terror like a red dragon coiling around A sense of escape like a hound snapping at you A sense of urgency like a golden snake entwining itself A thrilling feeling like an ice eagle swooping down

A game writer delayed by novels. To be honest, it's the first time I've seen this. It's really good. The plot is also good. If you don't want to see the details of the equipment, you can skip it because some people still like to watch it.

Except for the slow update, everything else was fine. Everything else was invincible until the end. It had peaks and troughs, which was pretty good.

It is a book with great potential, but there are two big problems in the early stage. Many people can't stand it. The real-life pace feels a bit slow. The server has only been opened for less than ten days after 200 chapters. The alien Tianxing Group and the first and second universes are such a big pitfall. I don't know how the author will write it. [Thinking] It is best to have no heroine or only one heroine. Don't write too many plots about women. If there is a heroine, don't write about the heroine being stupid, being kidnapped, and making trouble unreasonably. . There is still hope that there is no knife [almost crying] [almost crying]. Luo Ye, brother and sister Zhanhun, Xueyuan, Gu Xiaoxian [crying] You can come up with more ideas, don't worry about the word count to fool us [send heartfelt words] (of course it would be better to add more, add chicken drumsticks for you [laughing evilly]) Come on!

The author is strongly urged to tell the source of the equipment pictures and "which game they come from"

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Come on, just be yourself. Don't think about those who don't like you. What you have to choose is the majority of people who like you, not the small number of people who don't want to read it and give negative reviews.