Apocalypse Reborn: Young Master Jian

I actually don't understand why the protagonist group has to follow the large army and go back to the starting point. As a result, they have to give food to others and deal with a series of troubles caused by them. It feels like all this is just to miss his past life and let a group of people accompany him to fool around.

Alas, no, this book has definitely been changed again. It was clearly Jian Yu who called Lei Mo before to inform him of Lei Mo's return. Why is this paragraph missing? Also, I remember there was an extra chapter about Lei Mo later, saying that Lei Mo was reborn, and then he waited for the phone call sent to him by Jian Yu. Why is it missing?

The plot is very interesting and interesting. It's the author, your sentence fragmentation is really hard to understand. Suddenly I remembered those videos on the Internet that were poorly segmented and frightening. What should I say? It just feels very strange. For example, the last sentence of Chapter 4 and the sentence at the beginning of Chapter 5 should be the same sentence. Why should they be separated? Although it said it had no impact, it still felt a bit awkward. If you update that author in the future, can you make some changes? How do you really say that? It feels a bit awkward to listen to it from beginning to end, but overall this story is very attractive. How can I put it this way? It's just very, very good-looking. I particularly like the dual male protagonists, and I also have a soft spot for looks. The story is overall very good and good-looking. And I also particularly like this kind of slap in the face, you know.

The most unreasonable part of the whole book is that it doesn't kill everyone. I don't think there is anything as satisfying as revenge. Everything else is fine. Big boost for the author!

It's good to read. The sweetness of Jian Yu and Lei Mo in the book lies in the details. The other members of the team are also very powerful but most of them focus on unity. The team also has four battle pets and some interesting friends among them. The White Lotus Baicao Manman in the book is really ruthless in the later period. The whole book only has more than 100 chapters. If you read it, you will find that they are all connected. It would be nice if there were more plots outside.

The more you are a stranger in the world, the more unavailable you are. You are the joy of youth and the sweetness of the rest of my life. The years are quiet, as long as you are by my side. [Shy][shy]

The author discovered a blind spot, where is the protagonist's father? Isn't he on his way to find his father? Where is his father? I read it from beginning to end and didn't see his father's face. Isn't his father a political commissar? Well, the plot is also very exciting, but where is his father? This hole has not been filled!

It looks great! Master Jian and Lei Mo's CP is so easy to get along with, and they also have a secondary CP! The author has made it very neat. Except for the last chapter, each chapter must be 4,000 words.

Alas, it looks okay, but the villain woman has lived too long [smiles] [smiles] Couldn't she have died earlier [smile]

Not bad, very good-looking. But why didn't that vicious woman solve it earlier? She insisted on delaying it until the end, causing trouble for herself and putting herself in danger.