Ye Luoli: After I Made a Contract with Hei Xiangling

Finally, there is an article about Feng Yinsha CP, and it is the kind I love [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

I feel like this book is pretty good, but I just want the heroine to have a bigger golden finger! ! ! ! !

Core highlights: fan settings that break the rules 1. Heixiangling's "counterattack" and reinvention The most poignant thing about this fanfic is that it gives Hei Xiangling a more complete and cherished story. In the original work, she could not find her owner because of her scars and was repeatedly tortured by the plot. However, here the protagonist takes the initiative to contract with her, giving her the warmth of being "firmly chosen". The author's personal design was also very careful. He did not write her as a tool, but instead amplified her gentleness and tenacity, which satisfied many readers' uneasy feelings about this character. 2. Be clear-headed and complain, and refuse the filter of the protagonist group The copywriting directly states "unfriendly to the protagonist group, and will change later", which is very rare in fan fiction. Many Ye Luoli fans will mindlessly whitewash the controversial behavior of the protagonist group, but this article dares to directly complain about the double standards and problems of the protagonist group in the original work. The three views are very clear, such as not whitewashing Wen Qian's school violence, which has received praise from many readers. The protagonists are not static "bad guys". The later changes also make the characters more three-dimensional and avoid the stereotyped writing of black and white. 3. Relaxed and daily oriented, low reading threshold The main theme of the novel is "daily life without plot". It does not force a complicated fairyland war, but is more about the daily life of the protagonist and Hei Xiangling. It is very relaxing and healing to read. Coupled with the setting of "micro-group pet", Hei Xiangling can finally be treated well. This kind of "contrast healing" writing method is very suitable for readers who like to relax with fans and want to see the characters be well loved. 4. Super rich extra linkages, full of benefits The extra story is directly linked to "Balala Little Fairy", "Cute Academy" and "Harry Potter". This kind of cross-circle linkage is very new among fans. It is equivalent to opening an "Easter Egg Copy" for readers. Readers who like these IPs will be twice as happy, and it can also be seen that the author has a lot of imagination. Controversies and minor shortcomings 1. There is a threshold for the original party Because there are a large number of private designs + complaints about the protagonist group, die-hard fans of the original work may feel that it is "ooc" and "disrespectful of the original work". The author also said in advance in the copy "Go away the calf hair, extreme fans will make it thicker", which can be regarded as filtering the audience in advance. Readers who are concerned should be careful. 2. The double-edged sword of "no plot" It is written in a relaxed and everyday way. For readers who want to watch strong plots and intensive entertainment, they may feel that the pace is slow and lacks conflict and tension. It is more suitable for catching fish and relaxing reading before going to bed. 3. Obvious audience bias This article is more suitable for readers who are dissatisfied with the original protagonist group and feel sorry for Hei Xiangling. If you are a die-hard fan of the protagonist group, there is a high probability that you will be dissuaded by the complaints. Readers' reputation and summary Judging from the existing comments, this article has a good reputation among Ye Luoli's fans, and readers generally recognize its three views and its portrayal of Hei Xiangling: The praise focuses on: clear outlook, no whitewashing of controversial characters, Hei Xiangling's portrayal is very touching, and the extra linkage is surprising; The main point of controversy is that the adaptation of the original characters is extensive and not suitable for all original parties. Overall, it is a fanfic with a lot of attitude. It does not follow the trend and write routine and cool articles. Instead, it writes a warm and sober story with a preference for the characters and complaints about the original work. If you also feel sorry for Hei Xiangling in the original work and want to see her treated well and at the same time accept complaints about the protagonists, this article will suit your taste; but if you have a strong filter for the characters in the original work, it is recommended to enter the trap with caution.

How can I put it? It's very beautiful. Although it has some flaws, it's the first time I've seen an author who writes Ye Luoli with such a positive outlook. It's amazing. Keep up the good work! Don't give up, it won't be fun anymore [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

So far, I seem to like them. I have only one request. I like Bai Guangying and Pang Zun very much. Don't tear them apart [crying] [crying]

The writing is good, the ending is unexpected and expected, the three views are rare and normal, the problems of fairyland and human beings are solved from a human perspective, and the school violence of Wen Qian and Yeats is not whitewashed, and the extras are not bad!

After high school, the main plot is interspersed with some characters from Ye Luoli. Campus life and fairyland play are interspersed. The most important thing is that it is high school and it is time to fall in love! ! !

It's very interesting. I like it. It would be great if the author could add more updates.

It looks good [like] [like] It's best to tell the water prince to go away and don't disturb my family Lanlan [poke]

It looks good. Author, you haven't updated it for 24 hours.