A Big Shot Fell for Me at First Sight, and This Cannon Fodder Won Without Lifting a Finger

It's so sweet. The male protagonist falls in love at first sight, and the female protagonist's IQ is online. If the male protagonist likes it, go for it. I'm really tired of sweet love. I just love this kind of earthy boss. Sure enough, the most earthy is the best. The author, please give it a try [Love] [Love] [Love]

The first plane is very in line with my taste. I hope that the future world will also be so sweet and critical. Please give it a try, author! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩🤩💖You💖you💖you

It's not bad, but the female protagonist is not good at abusing scum and can only talk about it. In the first world, the original male and female protagonists harmed the female protagonist so much, and the female protagonist didn't fight back, she just talked about it, and she didn't help the original owner to get revenge. Later, it was also up to the male protagonist to deal with the original female protagonist and the original male protagonist. But the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is good and quite sweet.

It was not very mature at first and was a little awkward, but then it got better and better. The storyline is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

This book was wonderful and gave me ideas to talk about. 1. It can give readers a sense of empathy, make them feel emotional for the characters in the novel, and make them happy or cry as the plot develops. I think the appeal of this novel is that it allows readers to step into the role. 2. Although the language of the novel is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, making it enjoyable to read.

As a professional who writes about strong women and quick-dressing, this is one of the few sweet books that I like [smile][smile] and so far I haven't skipped a single chapter. To give you a reference, strong women are here to avoid lightning, and this book focuses on sweet pets! ! ! Tasks are secondary and love is primary. All of them are boyfriends who are ten years older than me. Please come in if you are older than me in age. Please come in if you are the fell in love at first sight type. [Send Heart] [Send Heart] Reading novels mainly focus on a person who is in a good mood. If it is good, read it, and if it is not good, then abandon it. Our main focus is a Buddhist type [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] To be honest, I quite like the characters in this book. The rhythm and writing are both good. I hope the author sister will continue to work hard [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] I finally updated to my own design, but it's stuck there, waiting for the update every day. It's really not enough to read [face covering] [face covering]

The author writes very well. I think each world is written in great detail. More than fifty chapters are just right! The detailed writing is really impressive! I would like to commend the author for carefully reading our comments and replying to us [blowing kiss]. I hope the author can insist on updating the code words every day, and his mentality should not be affected by those who argue. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Dear author, as long as you remember that people who agree with you will like your articles! Don't forget your original intention, all the fans who love you are here, and I will follow the article to the end [blowing kiss]

Personally, I think it looks great. I can't recommend it. But I really feel it's okay so far. You can give it a try. It's a newbie. It's definitely not perfect. Please bear with me, but I feel like there aren't many shortcomings.

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Okay, okay, although the author's writing style and writing style in the previous chapters are a bit green, it can be seen that he is gradually improving, and he is gradually able to control the plot proficiently. Although there are many chapters, each story is still very compact, making people feel that there is still more to read. However, I hope the author can innovate some small worlds. After all, there are so many stories about fast time travel and childbirth. If similar stories appear, you will still get bored. If you want to make it eye-catching, you can't just write about how the female protagonist gets the male protagonist's favor (seduces the male protagonist) and completes the task of giving birth to a child in daily life. Every character in the novel is alive. The heroine must maintain her own values ​​and understanding when performing tasks. She cannot stand the bad temper of the male protagonist and makes him chase his wife in the crematorium. To put it simply, it is to bring out the character's personality and add some psychological activities of the character. Maybe when she is doing things for the male protagonist, she may think one thing on the surface, but she is thinking another thing in her heart. This can make the character's image more full-bodied and increase the pleasure of reading. You can refer to some romance novels with high scores in mind-reading skills. Okay, I just made some appropriate suggestions. The author still has a lot of room for improvement, so keep up the good work!