Group Chat: I'm Obito, Why Should I Defect from Konoha?

The protagonist is cunning, ruthless, decisive, and adept at disguise. Too short a word count; needs time to read. Currently deemed unsuitable for consumption. 🍉

To be honest, it's pretty good. It's just that the multiple female leads are a bit of a letdown for someone like me who prefers Obito fanfiction. In my mind, Obito should only be with Rin, and no one else should be involved. If it's just about using someone else, that's fine, but it's already starting to lean towards a harem genre.

This passage, with its vivid descriptions of action and dialogue, paints a beautiful scene that runs throughout the middle of the story, serving as a central thread. Furthermore, by contrasting the tragic scene with the joyful one in the later battle, it reveals the people's happiness and hints that they are actually spies hidden by the powerful figure. It explains their apparent weakness in battle, leaving suspense and captivating the reader's interest.

It's pretty good. There aren't any major flaws so far. I hope this book gets better and better. It would be even better if it updated five chapters a day! @LookingUpAtTheStars

It's well-written, but don't read it if you're a saint. Also, the main character is a time traveler, not Obito from the original world 🤦 Those who are obsessed with the original work should not read this. The remaining bookworms can eat it with peace of mind as it has virtually no major toxicity.

I was enjoying watching it, and then it suddenly stopped. It's so frustrating.

This was a bit unexpected. I thought it was someone who was killed by Obito in the future returning to the chat group, and then something like that.

Author, you need to update more often, otherwise we'll all want to keep writing. Most of the time, these kinds of stories just get abandoned after a while. It looks nice, but there aren't enough of them.

A harem? What kind of women would she be involved with? The project was poorly completed and the woman was left out.

There's a satisfying sense of progression within it, and unlike the original work, the plot isn't static. The story flows seamlessly, incorporating famous scenes from the original, and the time travel element is particularly engaging. The characters' strength isn't overly exaggerated, and the gradual growth of their characters is truly captivating.