Chaos Across the Universe
逆乱寰宇
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Traditional Eastern Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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The Best Xuanhuan Novels
After reading *Peerless Immortal Maiden* and *Peerless Flying Immortal*, I’ve run out of books to read.
Do You Know What Traditional Xuanhuan Is? Only Reply If You Really Do
Looking for books similar to The King's Avatar of Ten Thousand Phases. What even counts as traditional fantasy? Which protagonist didn't grow up from childhood? Which one didn't face hardships along the way? Martial Ancestor Lin Dong, Flame Emperor Xiao Yan, Mu Chen: aren't they all at the pinnacle? Give me more old classics from over ten years ago. Transmigration
Looking for a Long Novel With a Male Lead Who Builds His Own Faction and Isn't a Doormat
Oh great authors, please, have mercy!
What Are Some Good Fantasy Novels?
Here are a few engrossing wuxia and fantasy novels, all real gems and must-reads for anyone in a reading slump! Share your own backlog too, haha. Are there any novels you can read over and over without getting tired of them?
Traditional Xuanhuan Is So Hard to Find!
It’s a proper fantasy novel, but nobody reads it. Even after it’s recommended, it gets no clicks. It’s so hard. As a fantasy author, I don’t know what I’m doing wrong! Could someone give me some advice?!
The Pinnacle of the Fantasy World
A Roundup of Great Books Like Sword of Coming
Everyone who clicks in will be glad they did. Leave your reading lists so we can recommend and hype books to each other.
Misty Rain Tower Is the GOAT. Fight Me
Any Books About Cultivation?
You know, the kind of book where you cultivate to the utmost and can become an immortal 🌚
Traditional Fantasy, Come Recommend Some Good Ones
Looking for traditional fantasy. Nothing where the protagonist is constantly humiliated and looked down on. Ideally, there’s an old master figure.
Xuanhuan, One Female Lead, Male-Oriented
Please, I'm out of books to read.
Traditional Fantasy Cultivation, No Mindless Wish Fulfillment!!!
The protagonist should be smart and not a self-sacrificing do-gooder. No harem! Other talented supporting characters should keep pace with the protagonist's growth. They should be both rivals and friends, with strong bonds. Don't have the protagonist stupidly leave everyone behind!
Passionate Xuanhuan, Forced Into Demonic Cultivation
Fantasy, no System, full of passion.
Are Traditional, Passionate Fantasy Stories a Thing of the Past? Looking for Ones with No System and No Do-Gooder Protagonists
Are traditional, passionate fantasy novels a thing of the past? Looking for ones without a System or a saintly protagonist.
Are Traditional Xuanhuan Novels Dead?
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I read the first seven chapters, and it was indeed a bit confusing. The characters did not appear clearly, especially the protagonist. The wedge actually affected the protagonist to a great extent. There were too many characters and the scenes were a bit heavy. The protagonist was not highlighted, and even somewhat obscured. The last two wedges are best used as extras. The protagonist's life experience can be slowly revealed in the next dozens of chapters. It is difficult to impress the readers by instilling the protagonist's past and present in the first few chapters. I don't represent all readers, this is just for me. Then the battle is fierce and your moves are fierce and diverse. This is your characteristic and strength. But success or failure lies in the battle scenes. The defeat lies in fighting for too long, and the plot cannot keep up with the rhythm of the battle. You cannot use 3,000 words in one chapter, or even the whole article is about fighting. It is too long, and readers are not here to learn how to write martial arts novels. If the plot is not eye-catching, it will be difficult to read it calmly as you said, and you can't help but read ten lines at a glance.
Don't you understand the three golden chapters? The first few chapters were written inexplicably, but there was some continuity in chapters one and two. The third chapter was inexplicably about the village. When I read the third chapter, I thought Komaki was the little boy in the first and second chapters. But in the fourth chapter, there was another surprise. What the hell, it was so confusing.
Work on the details again and see if there are any inconsistencies after you finish writing. I feel that the expression in the wedge needs to be refined so that it will be comfortable when reading.