Transmigrating into a Multiverse After Cosplaying as White Scaramouche

How should I put it, the overall idea is good, but the writing style is too immature, and the book's logic has some problems. For example, is it the traveler wearing Bai San's skin, or is the protagonist traveling to this world as Bai San? Also at the beginning, the encounter between the protagonist and Natsume Soseki could use more writing and word count (from the whisper of a pigeon) It gave me a feeling that the plot was too fast and a little awkward. I have always been curious, why is Natsume Soseki so... Respectful to Shirasan who suddenly appeared in Yokohama? (It even seems to give me a somewhat humble illusion) Maybe it's a personal reason, but I feel that some sentences are a bit stiff. It's a bit strange to write some incomprehensible sentences when the environment is not well described: You started to sensationalize me before I even got into the mood? Feeling. Once again, I look forward to the author's progress. After all, novels are different from compositions. Novels sometimes need more description to highlight the subsequent emotions. The above are just suggestions. If you feel uncomfortable watching it, it's my problem. Please let me go. Come on, look forward to the newcomer's progress hahaha

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I like it, He Zai is super cute, I would like to send my heart [send my heart][send my heart]

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Very pretty! ! ! ! It's just a little bit short, not enough to watch QAQ, big update! The child has no food to eat (><)

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There is a little bug at the beginning. It's not at the beginning. Why? I want to know which part of the plot I missed? There are also some typos. I suggest the author read them and correct them. If there are bugs, you can simply modify them and try to read them smoothly. The plot line went too fast, and I suddenly felt good about it. Then, it became ambiguous and it felt so fast. Very well written. Okay, I'm leaving