Maintain Your Character in the Torture Novel

Let me briefly explain it first. I have only read the story of the first world, so my opinion may be biased, but I think if it is not written well, I can say a sentence in advance, rather than a sentence in the later world, which will be better (this may be the psychology of some readers who try to make me read later). Although I didn't spend any money, I also spent my time talking. To put it simply, the first world is a story in which a childhood sweetheart ends up falling from the sky halfway, and the male protagonist cannot resist the plot and falls from the sky together. In the middle, when the male protagonist is entangled with Tiansheng, he also wants to be with the female protagonist. This is a mentality of wanting and wanting. And throughout the story, from the moment Tianxiang appears, the male protagonist is ambiguous but doesn't want to let go. Even though it was said at the end that he was married to Tianxiang and that he would no longer be entangled with her (I didn't read this section clearly, please correct me if I have any questions), the ending was a combination of he and oe, and I didn't see the atmosphere of be at all. It's said to be abusive to the male protagonist. Even the few drops of cat urine he dropped would make dogs disgusted. Moreover, the male protagonist's character is centrally air-conditioned (specifically in a derogatory sense here). I feel incompetent to accept that my sweetheart is like a scumbag. Speaking of being controlled by the plot, I didn't see him feeling helpless in order to escape the plot but was forced to fall in love with the sky. I felt that he was quite happy with it. Four stars means the author's writing is good so far, and one star means I was disgusted by the male protagonist in the first world. That's it, goodbye👋

Very well written! ! The image of the heroine is very good, the details are handled very well, and the emotional description is very profound, which allows me to experience the feelings of the heroine, but there is a little more. However, the writing here is very good, I will leave a mark first\^O^/, and when this book becomes popular, I will become a long-time fan! ! ! (° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho! Keep up the good work, author (ง•̀_•́)งI give it a five-star rating^ω^! ! !

After watching the first world, I thought it was quite interesting! The heroine in it completely fits my ideal type. She is calm, generous, gentle and has a brain (not a love brain) and can grow on her own (without pretending to be sexy). The heroine is more on the road to improving herself! What I feel after watching it is that the male protagonist has been weakened? I don't know if that's right, I just think the heroine is so attractive to me... It's inevitable that the male protagonist likes her (although the plot is very powerful). What attracts me is not the various slap-in-the-face plots of the female protagonist. It's not like other fast-traveling stories that only focus on tasks. She is doing her best while doing the best in the task. The appearance of Gu Shi'an falling in love with the heroine is the best proof. Including the step-by-step step-by-step approach to completing the task, what also touched me was that the author explained the relationship between the "original owner" and the "host" (similar to whether the host would feel uncomfortable if it were worn by the original owner?). Very few novels will explain this, and the explanation in the article makes us feel more at ease when reading the article. In addition, the stories of the passers-by in the article are slightly out of touch with the original text and are well designed. In fact, they are not completely uncontrollable. They can all be changed according to opportunities, right? Then at the end of the first world, many people scolded the male protagonist, well... The author of sadistic novels still has to be big-hearted. My personal feeling is: I will not feel uncomfortable in this book, which makes me pity, because the female protagonist has raised herself very well, so the male protagonist is not the male protagonist. The so-called... Really... Let's put it this way, I have also read a lot of sadistic books, and I will subconsciously take on the perspective of the heroine and feel the frustration and gain of "I" who "love first". The male protagonist in the book will also twist his heart whether he loves "me", as if he has been stabbed... But Su! In fact, the psychology of the female protagonist in this book is the reaction of normal people. The momentary heartbeat when getting along with the male protagonist, the discomfort when jealous, the unswerving pursuit of excellence, the self-consistency of knowing that the plot is difficult to change... I feel the heroine's slow growth and her energy, so I don't feel uncomfortable (of course, everyone is reading a novel and thinking There is nothing wrong with the relationship from beginning to end, this is a sadistic novel after all) But what I mean is: life is not only about love, the heroine is very mature in thought and action, and it is good for her to manage the life she wants. Love, that is, the hero, whether she overcomes the plot or not, is not so necessary for her (we also need to become big women in life~) As for the last opportunity to agree to the male lead... It would be to agree to the ending of the TV series based on them! Since it doesn't matter whether there is more male protagonists in life, then open up the situation and give a chance, which is equivalent to people rushing to be a male nanny. Life is so short and yet so long~ It's a pity that I didn't see any foreshadowing, such as the diary written by the female protagonist (?), How the male protagonist escapes from the plot... The above are all personal thoughts (tonic scold me), the last one! I will keep the novel on my bookshelf and wait for the author's updates~

The writing is very good, keep up the good work, [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] is really good to read. The first aspect has the inner feeling of a youth campus novel. I like it so much [blowing kiss]

The first world depends on personal preference. In the first world, the male protagonist is always controlled by the plot, and he can't help himself when he encounters the female protagonist. Jiang Jiang can make a vicious female supporting character semi-out of plot control because Tiandao has little control over the supporting characters. After all, male and female protagonists and key nodes are must-haves in a novel. Of course, this is my personal understanding. This book is non-CP. Some of Jiang Jiang's emotional controls were staged and some were controlled by the original owner's subconscious awakening. Looking forward to the completion of the second world, give the author a five-star encouragement

Consider writing a side story [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]Write a side story for the first world [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] I can't accept it. I really can't accept the possibility of Lin Chu being with the heroine [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]. Dumeiba [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Xiao Gu is like a white moonlight that briefly leaves little traces [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I can't sleep, it's really too bad [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] The ending of the first world [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] is too bad

Ness, this plot is really good and quite novel. No, I always get a Mary Sue or a slap in the face, a love-at-first-sight plot, (˵¯͒¯͒˵) I love it so much

I watched it for the lightning protection point. The lightning protection point is the setting that I like. The queen of the sea raises fish, and the heroine cares about her kidneys but not her heart. Then I only read the first world. The writing is not bad, but what's wrong with it? Where to raise fish? And why didn't that scumbag abuse him in the first world? Swinging between two ends, now that a vicious female protagonist has awakened, the heroine also said that she would give the male protagonist one last chance to help him, but in the end he was still controlled by the plot. The final result turned out to be that the male protagonist came back and gave him a chance to pursue her. I feel like I didn't see what I wanted to see, or what I thought was introduced to me, I didn't see it in the article. The writing is not bad and the writing is readable.

I was really looking forward to reading this novel at the beginning, but the ending almost shocked me to death. This is the second heart-breaking novel that I have read. I don't know how to describe my current mood...

Has the author considered writing specifically about Bai Yueguang? He only appeared in a few chapters and left an indelible impression in my heart. Gu Shi'an and Gu Shian are too Bai Yueguang. Even after reading the first story, he left a deeper impression on me than the male protagonist or even the male and female co-stars who often appear. It is really too Bai Yueguang.