I Change the Fate of the Ill-Starred in Dream of the Red Chamber

The latest chapters so far are well written, and the entire plot has a tense rhythm and a strong sense of immersion. The heroine does not just have a smooth sailing with the golden finger tips. She also has many things that she cannot do despite her efforts. She can only watch the arrival of those fates. From the beginning when she did not know how fate arrived to now being able to analyze the original direction of fate and the direction of reality, the growth line of the heroine is obvious. She experienced the planning of knowing her destiny, and enjoyed the benefits brought by the prophet, and then witnessed her destiny playing out in a way she could not imagine, and then tried to interfere with her destiny but to no avail, and extended her tentative tentacles step by step. This step-by-step process allowed her to learn to plan a direction more beneficial to herself under the unstoppable trend. Her actions gradually became more thoughtful, and her sight began to shift from self-preservation in the house to the field of power. She was always wary of King Jing's love. She never believed in the love of the powerful. Instead, she felt the oppression of the imperial power. She was full of free rationality and rebellious spirit. The sub-plots are also well written, including Baoyu who dislikes fame and wealth but cannot resist temptation but is also very empathetic, Jia Huan who is self-deprecating and has low self-esteem but still has his true nature, Yingchun who is so aware of her own situation that she gives up and chooses to be a "wooden" person. Daiyu, who is smart, sensitive and politically literate, Baochai, who is sharp-minded and determined to make progress, Yuanchun, who carefully balances the emperor's heart and puts family first... The settings and descriptions of the supporting roles and various minor characters are rich and rich, and it is worth looking forward to.

It's good to watch. The ending is exactly as I imagined. Tanchun did not marry the prince and end up trapped in a wall for the rest of his life. Instead, he escaped from his shell and created his own world in the boundless. I really like Tanchun's character of daring to love and hate, and will not give up his own interests for anyone. In short, this article is still worth reading.

The author's writing style is very good and I like the content very much. But I hope this book can give Xue Baochai a better ending 🤔 Of course, if this is not within the author's plan, it is not forced.

Tanchun's psychology is well portrayed: he knows that the Jia Mansion is about to collapse, and although he tries his best to save it, he is helpless under the forces of all parties; he yearns for freedom and expects to be respected, but he is still powerless against the imperial power, and in the end he can only fake his death to escape. From the initial struggle for a way out, to the confusion and pain of being unable to change the situation, to letting go. Life is nothing more than this!

It looks good, the characters are well created, the plot logic is also very rigorous, the content is also very smooth, and there are many private settings, which are not considered shortcomings. After all, there is always something to be filled when deviating from the framework of the Red Mansion. I think it is acceptable even if it is not outrageous.

4.3. I'm surprised that such a good book isn't popular. It's rare to find a good Red Mansion fan with very good writing style. Even if there is a system, the writing style still has the charm of ancient times, which is rare. The plot is unconventional and the logic is perfect. It doesn't hurt that there are occasionally a few parts that feel inappropriate. It can be left on your bookshelf and re-read later. But starting from the confiscation of Jia's house to the end, the pace was too fast, and I didn't appreciate a lot of the logic. I haven't read the original work, only the drama, so I don't understand the relationship between the characters in Bai Su Su Bai Yi Zhen Baoyu. Based on my existing knowledge, I only know that Zhen Baoyu and Jia Baoyu are somewhat similar. I feel that the explanation here is not very clear. Jia Baoyu became a monk very suddenly.

Okay, okay, it completely fits the image of Tanchun in my mind. Tanchun is my favorite character in Dream of Red Mansions. I hope to give her a good ending. In this way, her mother, brother, and close maids are all safe. I thought the male protagonist was a good person, but I didn't expect him to be so conflicted. I only figured it out after reading the author's comments. It's so complicated, I feel like I've grown a brain after reading it. And I don't really like to watch plots. Basically, I don't watch much except for the places where people explore sex. But it's really well written.

A very qualified heroine sober novel. The heroine Jia Tanchun, as a reborn feudal noblewoman, has this sobriety and independence throughout the whole story, which is commendable. 👍 The plot avoids clichés, and strives to pave her own path from beginning to end. She finds that Jia's family cannot be saved, and gives up decisively, but she does her best to protect those who should be protected. Great 👍 👍 In terms of characterization, Tan Chun is written very well. She has means, ties, pride, and people she can't let go of, but because she grew up in that era, she struggles and hesitates, and she will settle all the people she cares about before leaving. She is imperfect, so she is real. 👍 This is more realistic than many heroines who are ready to kill everyone after rebirth. Other supporting characters also have their own flesh and blood. The royal pair of brothers. Tsk. Two kinds of hypocrisy, the same background. Self-impression is ridiculous. Lock it up, you two. In Dream of Red Mansions, there aren't many scandals, just the two of you. [Working on draft] Fortunately, the heroine didn't believe in that ridiculous "love". From beginning to end, she loved herself the most. Women can also choose their own path. 💕

This is a very good book among the Red Mansions fanfics that I have read. Most of the girls have a good ending. Tanchun is not blinded by false emotions and is free. It is really good. 👍👍👍

I tied it after two days of reading. Compared to other Red Mansion fanfics, the writing is more realistic and has fewer bugs. What I like most is the character of Tanchun. When I read it, I was very afraid that she would marry Mu Xingyun hastily after taking control of the Jia family. Fortunately, it showed that she was more using him. Very good character design and good writing.