You Work Hard at Cultivating Immortality; I'll Go Home, Marry, and Raise Kids

No one has commented, so I'm taking the blame for myself and giving it five stars is not too much.

Not bad, keep up the good work, I feel like practicing a little bit, and I don't have a harem randomly, it's very good! The most important thing is precision, not too much. Too much. Without good writing, it's just data. I hope you can work hard!

Overall, this book is readable. Let me talk about the issues first. 1. This is originally a system article about many children and many blessings, but in the middle and early stages, the protagonist slowly cultivates through his own efforts, and the system is relatively crude before the upgrade. Readers who read the article about a brainless system may be dissatisfied. 2. The female characters were not handled well. Some of the female characters that had been described with words and ink were not accepted. Instead, a matchmaker was hired to acquire more than a dozen women who had not been described with words and ink at once. The heroine seemed not three-dimensional enough. 3. In the early fights, the villain is always just a little stronger than the protagonist, but not much, which is very deliberate. Then the protagonist has to struggle to win. It loses the feeling of a refreshing novel and becomes more like a royal and passionate novel. Readers of systematic novels may not buy it. 4. There are some logical loopholes. For example, if the father-in-law has a treasure, searching for the soul can solve it, but the villain can't think of it. The shortcomings mentioned above are not major problems, and most of them have been solved later. The system has been upgraded, and the role of the system has become greater. The fights have become less ink, and there have been a lot more exciting points. It is considered a 56 points in the early stage, barely passing. As long as the system is gradually upgraded after the first 30 or 50 chapters, it becomes a pretty good and enjoyable book. Readable.

As long as it doesn't turn into a pig story, I can keep chasing it.

Fast, update, the author should not care so much, come on, the rating is low

It's not bad, but I still have too few wives. You need to marry more, and you need to marry a name worthy of you.

If the Zhang family doesn't handle it well, they will be scolded later.

Take a good look at New Year's Day, the 11th day of the new year. New years are added, sparks reflect the frost and snow, and fireworks shoot to the stars. All your wishes come true. On this wonderful day with all my heart, I wish my dear friend all the best with my whole-hearted greetings, my whole-hearted blessings, and my whole-hearted thoughts.

This novel is good, better than others, decisive in killing, and the characters are better. Unlike other novels, it can still retain the habits of the earth after traveling once.

Nice! It doesn't collapse later, you can see the ending