Siheyuan: The Scheming Troublemaker Who Stirs Up the Whole Courtyard

So far, it seems alright. Don't be too harsh. Each character's role isn't static. For example, many fanfiction writers portray Jia Dongxu poorly, but if he weren't excellent, Yi Zhonghai wouldn't likely choose him for retirement. He must have virtues and abilities, and while his personality might not be assertive, making him easier to control.

Five stars. It's so well-written, logically sound, and fluently written. How could the average score be so low?

I think it's well-written. There are no scenes of animal cruelty. However, the intrigue and power struggles within the courtyard are described very clearly. The actions and behaviors of several characters are well-developed within the context of the courtyard setting. Yu Shui is about to undergo a change of identity, initially helping his brother but then betraying him.

Why is the rating so low when the writing is good?

Well-reasoned, with clear cause and effect, and very well written. When two armies meet on a narrow path, the brave will prevail; when evenly matched, the strategist will succeed.

It's well-written, with basic logic and a relatable, down-to-earth feel. The plot is commendable. The biggest flaws are the protagonist stealing money and then donating it, and the messy, drawn-out relationship with Yu Shui.

It's pretty good, don't write "jump," it's a classic courtyard house.

Good grass, five points isn't enough, it needs at least eight points.

The initial donation of 37.5 to Jia Dongxu is truly remarkable; anyone who can keep watching is a genius! 👍

The beginning was quite good. Why did the style change later? Also, the use of plot devices shouldn't be so abrupt. Most importantly, you need to stick to your own writing style. We can only offer suggestions, but those are just suggestions and shouldn't affect your overall concept. You can use what's useful as a reference, but don't try to pander to the readers. Stay true to yourself and bring out your unique strengths. Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง