Siheyuan: The Scheming Troublemaker Who Stirs Up the Whole Courtyard

It seems pretty good so far, don't be too pessimistic. It is said that the positioning of each character is not static. For example, Jia Dongxu, many Siheyuan fans have written him very poorly, but if he is not good, Yi Zhonghai is unlikely to choose him for retirement. He must have advantages in moral character and ability, but may not be strong in character, which is also easy to control. Yi Zhonghai is known as the Moral God. Even if he sided with the Jia family, he would definitely be like Runyu Silent. There was moral kidnapping, but it was impossible to go too far. The neighbors were not fools, otherwise there would never be a second time. This is also inconsistent with the abilities and methods of a hypocrite in his 50s. You can question his character and morality, but you cannot doubt his experience and emotional intelligence. Silly Zhu Tianqin should not have no bottom line. Firstly, he does sympathize with the Jia family on the one hand. Secondly, he has low emotional intelligence and is always undermined by Xu Damao. He can't find a wife. Qin is his spare tire, but he didn't target her from the beginning. In his heart, he still wants to find a beautiful and young city girl. Later, with changes in age and external environment, this possibility became smaller and smaller, and Qin Cai became his only choice. Therefore, it is illogical to say that Silly Zhu in the early stage could not add Qin Huairu without any brains.

Five points. The writing is so good, the logic is reasonable, and the writing is fluent. How come the average score is so low?

I feel like it was well written. There is no such storyline of animal cruelty. But the plot of the intrigue in the courtyard is very clearly written. Some of the actions and operations related to several characters and the plot of the courtyard at that time were well written. Yu Yu is about to undergo an identity change, and he has started to help his brother and become a cheater. Of course, part of the reason for this is the protagonist. His love for the protagonist may have some influence. Of course, this is my personal opinion. I have not watched it. The novels I read before were all long-form, but now the novels I read in Siheyuan are all short stories. Suddenly, I am a writer who is slow in writing storylines. I am not used to it yet. I hope the author can develop the storylines faster.

Well written, why is the rating not high?

Reasonable and well-founded, with cause and effect, well written When we meet on a narrow road, the brave will win; when we are evenly matched, the one who plans will succeed.

The writing is good, the basic logic is still there, and it has a certain sense of life that makes it down-to-earth for everyone to watch. The plot is remarkable. The biggest shortcoming is that the protagonist steals money and donates it, and there is also rain.

It's pretty good. If you don't write it, it's the best product in the courtyard.

Good grass, five points is not good, at least eight points

Donate 37.5 To Jia Dongxu at the beginning, everyone who can watch it is a god👍

What I wrote above is pretty good. Why did your style change later? There is also a golden finger to use, and it cannot be changed suddenly. The most important thing is that you stick to your own writing style. We can give you suggestions at most, but suggestions are just suggestions and cannot affect your overall idea. You can use it as a reference if it is useful. Don't deliberately cater to readers. Stick to yourself and come up with something unique to you. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง