[Western Fantasy] [Alternate World] [Lighthearted and Witty] [Leader-Type Hero] [Revenge] [Plot]
With his mentor's blessing, Wayne spent two busy years assembling a hero's party, then successfully retired (by getting kicked out).
“Wayne, you have been expelled from the King's Hand.”
Wayne stood silent in the great hall. What kind of hellscape would the party become without him?
After all, it included:
The [Elite Knight], foul-mouthed and sharp-tongued, with a taunting aura turned up to the max;
The [Holy Tower Mage], whose spells covered the whole battlefield, friend and foe alike;
The [Pokemon Priest], who loved grave-robbing and raising the dead;
And the [Shadow Assassin], who spent every day invisible and loved stealing women's underwear.
Wayne silently bowed to thank the queen, then turned and left.
Doris wasn't sure if it was her imagination, but she could have sworn she saw a hint of pity in Wayne's eyes as he departed…
It's not that the subject matter, the content, or the protagonist is bad; it's that sometimes the author's writing doesn't match the intended level of sophistication, making it seem unappealing. For example, when the female knight sought help, the author could have easily asked her first, then agreed—otherwise, how would the train move?
The old theme is okay, but I don't like it.
It's nice, but I don't like it.
It's alright, quite interesting.
Not bad, it looks pretty good.
The protagonist looks like a eunuch.
The plot seems familiar; I think I've seen it in a comic book. I'm not sure if I'm remembering correctly.
Keep it up, author!
The subject matter is great, but it's a bit tedious and the article drags on. The pace could be sped up appropriately.
The subject matter is good, but the writing is really bad.