Fleeing South from Famine with a Spirit Spring Space Full of Supplies

This is my first time writing a novel and some parts may not be very good. Because I have been a bookworm for many years and have read too many novels, I suddenly thought of giving it a try myself that day, but I didn't expect that I have persisted until now. I have to say that it is not as simple as I imagined. I would be very happy if everyone likes it. I also hope that the baby who likes it can give a kind evaluation. By the way, here are some of the most common problems I have encountered. First, why don't you just come over and kill the original heroine. Because the heroine is an adult who has received modern education, she cannot come over and kill someone. And it's not sure if she has the halo of being a heroine. If her death causes some changes in the timeline, it won't be worth the loss. Secondly, if you keep it, there will be more plot and tension. Second, why not leave/live in the mountains before disaster strikes. Because what I want to write is an escape novel. If I leave early, it will be over. How can I write it? Also, once I finished reading or halfway through it, I also wrote down the reasons why I wanted to escape with the villagers. As for why he didn't go into the mountains, the heroine's brothers still have their studies, and the family members also have their own affairs, and they have no intention of being isolated from the world. So I wouldn't consider living in the mountains. Not everyone yearns for a life of isolation. (The author himself yearns for it!) There is also the issue of taking things out. I personally feel that the heroine is not a holy mother, but she chooses to go with everyone. She can't possibly watch them starve to death, right? There are many female protagonists. She secretly helps everyone and makes her family's life better, so she shouldn't be considered a virgin, right? When disaster strikes, it will be easier for everyone to cope if they are strong and healthy. And if you have the conditions, why don't you just make yourself miserable and suffer and starve with everyone else. The heroine's family eats secretly and does not help the villagers. No matter how powerful they are, they can't pretend to be hungry, thin and helpless, right? Then why can't everyone have a better life, so that the heroine's family won't be too conspicuous. Don't leave a negative review after just reading a little bit. Reading novels is meant to be a pastime. If you feel it's not good, you can quit. Don't criticize and disgust yourself and deny other people's achievements. Not really. What I write now is really just for love (not earning money at all), but I just don't want to let down the babies I've been chasing. This is my first work and I still hope to see more comments from likes. Of course it's not that I can't accept criticism, but I hope it's a well-intentioned criticism and an evaluation after carefully reading it. Then I will accept it humbly. But if you don't like it after just reading a little, please quit. There is no need to leave a bad review before leaving. It will really make you feel uncomfortable. It will also mislead other babies who haven't watched it yet.

The heroine is pretty good but she has a good outlook on life. There are no super relatives and everyone in the family is very nice. Some people in the village are really annoying but everyone is very united. It is ordinary and a little funny in some places. It is not bad and you can watch it. The main thing is that there is really no frustrating plot, and everything is resolved quickly without any delay. The space is really perfect, I really want to own one [laughs evilly]

It is recommended that the author read it on his mobile phone, and then listen to it. Some sentences are too long. I like to listen to books and speak faster when listening. Some sentences are too long and it is a bit awkward to listen to. For example, in Chapter 25, the answer is: "Okay, so on... (Omitted)" It should be (ok,...) This would be better. I don't know whether the author updated it on a computer or a mobile phone. Some paragraphs are also very long. When you read it on a mobile phone, you will find that you can have more breaks.

I saw the recommendation today, I really like it [adoration], remember to update it [adoration] [adoration]

The extra is inexplicable, so it's better not to leave it. I need to complain about the names of Qiao's family here, but I really don't want to comment anymore. The reason why the star is deducted is the name and the extra. The other content is still ok to pass the time.

So far so good, looking forward to the follow-up

Very beautiful, worth recommending

Like this type

Very well written, I like reading it

The writing is okay. You can read it in Shu Huang. Home Daily is too short and a bit slow. You should have escaped earlier.