Online Gaming: The Deadly Poisoned Corpse

I almost got the first review. I think the game's setting is fine. I can understand the cute girl's actions in the story, but why did she fall for the protagonist? There should be a trigger. Xing Tian giving the inheritance is too direct (it's foreshadowing; if there's more to the story later, then disregard what I said).

Overall it's not bad, but why doesn't the game call out the pet when it's available? Why does it still have to fight alone? 😂 Why have I only absorbed 3 skills after more than 100 chapters? Aren't there 5 skill slots?

It's well written; I hope it can reach several thousand chapters.

A truly excellent book! Having read so many gaming laptops, this one is remarkably engaging and doesn't get boring easily! The author has a strong foundation! Respectfully submitted by a reader from Fuzhou, Chongqing!

The author didn't promote this book enough, otherwise it wouldn't have such a low score. The writing is very strong, and the control of details in the battle scenes is practically perfect. It's definitely worth listening to. The above points out the advantages, but there are too many disadvantages. Taking only combat strength and attractive appearance as examples, let's start with the appearance.

The author tried an upgraded version of audiobook with multi-person voiceover. I prefer listening to audiobooks; reading them is too hard on my eyes!

It's alright so far, no major flaws. The attributes, classes, skills, and equipment categories are all fairly normal. Keep it up!

Keep it up! It's well written. Maybe not many people will see this now, but it will eventually be discovered when you're in a reading slump. It's quite well written.

The writing isn't great, but the plot is reasonable.

It's very good, why isn't it rated?