Fatal Hunt

A new book has started! It looks great! After this one is finished, will you continue writing this type of book? 😏😏😏

Beautiful, very beautiful

It can be considered a high-quality article at present. The biggest problem might lie in the second instance. The author intended to showcase the protagonist's abilities from the perspective of a lawful player. However, this focus was too extreme, resulting in too little screen time for the protagonist. The entire instance essentially sums up the protagonist's actions at the end, giving the impression of forced and contrived character development.

It's alright. I personally enjoy protagonist-centric puzzle games. Lone Wolf, Ruthless... There aren't many chapters yet. I wonder how many chapters it will have. Keep it up! I think it's good, readable.

The plot is very well-structured and detailed, the writing is excellent, and the details are handled very well. This kind of writing is rare on Tomato Books. However, for a new book, it's best not to stockpile chapters; it's easy for it to be "held back" (i. E., Allowed to accumulate chapters). More frequent updates are recommended.

I've been a long-time fan and have always supported you 😁

It's very good, you can watch it without hesitation even if there's no female lead.

It's great, I love reading it, it's exceptionally well-written. Secondly, I'm begging for more frequent updates! How do you manage to sit still? It's so short, and I finished it in no time! 😠 [Please update more frequently!] The ending was too sudden.

The writing is exquisite, with the author's unique style, making it one of the best books on Tomato Books.

It's a bit short.