I Became a Vampire Girl and Started the Industrial Revolution

The subject matter and content of the book are very good. As long as there are no poisonous points, the later period will definitely be quite exciting. It is recommended that the protagonist is single and hangs out with his mother. It is best not to write about a female protagonist and a male protagonist. I have seen many authors who write this way, which leads to impure and long content in the later part of the article. Either the writing collapses, or a large number of readers are lost. Simple family love is very good. Then the author can consider writing in the later stage and developing it into the space civilization era, but it is more difficult to grasp and easy to collapse. Finally, from what I can see so far, the writing is quite good. The pace is a little fast at the beginning, but it is just right. There is no hydrology or procrastination. There are also some places where the process of writing is relatively fast and lacks a little detailed description. Overall, the writing is quite good, and the author can greatly support it.

Save money: Before watching: gender reversal + lily + medieval times, yay! Just watched: Industrial Revolution Speed ​​Run, yay! See now: sci-fi, yay! No saving: The overall pace is very fast, so in the early stage it feels like it is just a qualified novel, but it gets better and better as you go to the end - it is constantly digging holes, filling holes and gradually improving them, and the full-bodied characters are really unstoppable. At the same time, the world view is well constructed and self-contained. Another point is that the author's knowledge base and imagination are very large. Anyway, I love watching it. [Working on draft]

Good good! This is the second book in the red zone that interests me after Su Zheng 😄, but updates are not regular. Why are these red books so slow 😢

It has the potential to be a masterpiece, with a huge world view, detailed descriptions, and emotional mobilization brought about by the description of the scenes in the context. However, I personally feel that it has developed too fast, and too many places that should be written clearly have been skipped. The time between several industrial revolutions has been greatly shortened. In fact, it stands to reason that this will bring a lot of social changes The problem is, if this development continues, it will soon transition to interstellar civilization. However, the author should have thought of it when writing the world view of the stars. The discovery of "New World" has revealed a corner of ancient interstellar civilization, so I won't spoil it. Just watch it. Those who like this type of movie will love it very much.

It's not toxic at the moment, it's very good, the style is more serious, it's not a light novel, but it's very enjoyable. Those who like Blood Princess and the revolutionary style of another world can just jump in without thinking. 🥰🥰In addition, I hope the author will not stop updating, I will keep following it.

Okay, okay, this kind of book is the best these days [laughs crookedly] It was a great read, not a boring love story It's a pity that I can't write too detailedly, because I was blocked by Tomato

The development of technology and the formation of society during the Industrial Revolution is well written, but it feels a bit too fast and general. In fact, what I enjoy about reading this kind of writing is that the development in the book is a reflection of the development of civilization in reality. Faced with the fact that humans have created such a great civilization, I feel proud, so I hope there are more details. And I really like the setting of the vampire princess 🥰

Well, the quality is really high. It's a rare article that I can really read. What should I say? There is a unique charm. This charm may be hidden in the mind.

It's very good. Although I felt a bit bad at the beginning, the plot afterwards is really good. Why is it only scored 7.4? Tomatoes must be poisonous. I don't accept that such a healthy article is given such a low score! What's the group number? Let me join the group quickly!!!

This is the first time I read this kind of book. This kind of medieval painting style + the theme of the industrial revolution, why is it not a kind of alternative and refreshing article [laughter] Beautiful, no need to say more