I Became a Vampire Girl and Started the Industrial Revolution

The subject matter and content of the book are very good. As long as there are no poisonous points, the later period will definitely be quite exciting. It is recommended that the protagonist is single and hangs out with his mother. It is best not to write about a female protagonist and a male protagonist. I have seen many authors who write this way, which leads to impure and long content in the later part of the article. Either the writing collapses, or a large number of readers are lost. Simple family love is very good. Then the author can consider writing in the later stage and developing it into the space civilization era, but it is more difficult to grasp and easy to collapse. Finally, from what I can see so far, the writing is quite good. The pace is a little fast at the beginning, but it is just right. There is no hydrology or procrastination. There are also some places where the process of writing is relatively fast and lacks a little detailed description. Overall, the writing is quite good, and the author can greatly support it.

Save money: Before watching: gender reversal + lily + medieval times, yay! Just watched: Industrial Revolution Speed ​​Run, yay! See now: sci-fi, yay! No saving: The overall pace is very fast, so in the early stage it feels like it is just a qualified novel, but it gets better and better as you go to the end - it is constantly digging holes, filling holes and gradually improving them, and the full-bodied characters are really unstoppable. At the same time, the world view is well constructed and self-contained. Another point is that the author's knowledge base and imagination are very large. Anyway, I love watching it. [Working on draft]

Good good! This is the second book in the red zone that interests me after Su Zheng [laughs], but updates are not regular. Why are these red books so slow [cry]

It has the potential to be a masterpiece, with a huge world view, detailed descriptions, and emotional mobilization brought about by the description of the scenes in the context. However, I personally feel that it has developed too fast, and too many places that should be written clearly have been skipped. The time between several industrial revolutions has been greatly shortened. In fact, it stands to reason that this will bring a lot of social changes The problem is, if this development continues, it will soon transition to interstellar civilization. However, the author should have thought of it when writing the world view of the stars. The discovery of "New World" has revealed a corner of ancient interstellar civilization, so I won't spoil it. Just watch it. Those who like this type of movie will love it very much.

It's not toxic at the moment, it's very good, the style is more serious, it's not a light novel, but it's very enjoyable. Those who like Blood Princess and the revolutionary style of another world can just jump in without thinking. 🥰🥰In addition, I hope the author will not stop updating, I will keep following it.

Okay, okay, this kind of book is the best these days [laughs crookedly] It was a great read, not a boring love story It's a pity that I can't write too detailedly, because I was blocked by Tomato

The development of technology and the formation of society during the Industrial Revolution is well written, but it feels a bit too fast and general. In fact, what I enjoy about reading this kind of writing is that the development in the book is a reflection of the development of civilization in reality. Faced with the fact that humans have created such a great civilization, I feel proud, so I hope there are more details. And I really like the setting of the vampire princess [Adoration]

Well, the quality is really high. It's a rare article that I can really read. What should I say? There is a unique charm. This charm may be hidden in the mind.

It's very good. Although I felt a bit bad at the beginning, the plot afterwards is really good. Why is it only scored 7.4? Tomatoes must be poisonous. I don't accept that such a healthy article is given such a low score! What's the group number? Let me join the group quickly!!!

(Incomprehensible whisper) Author... More! (Dark and twisted crawling) There are no new chapters to read, and I feel like there are bugs crawling on me (randomly attacking other readers) ∠( ᐛ ∠)_

The article is very well written. The author has a high level of writing quality and is well prepared with knowledge. This book is one of the few that I can read. I have read a lot of industrial revolutions, but the content of the industrial revolution in this book is particularly rich. It is different from other books and is extremely beautiful.

Very well written! Why only 7.3 Points [face covering]

The imagination is rich, and the descriptions of industry and military are very careful, as is the description of femininity. The author may have some kind of side job~

It's great, it's great, the revolution in another world, each original technology has its own theory, it looks very clear The formulation of national policies and the description of national crises are also very good. Giant ships, cannons and revolution! But it felt like Alicia was in a very good state of mind, and she was even unusually calm about subverting the imperial power. When I was listening to the book, I thought there was going to be a quarrel. The strategic deployment and on-the-ground descriptions of the battlefield are also very good, but it is a pity that there is no strategic map (which I am looking forward to, to be honest). If there is a strategic map, and with Lenovo, there should be a brain-painting movie. It's a pity that the full score is 5 points, otherwise I would have given it 14514 points (I finally have time and can take the time to write book reviews and paragraph reviews. Great! I will re-read it later and make up all the paragraph reviews and chapter reviews that I have not made up before.)

It is useless to say more. It is a very, very good novel. There is no doubt about it. There are too many knives in reality. I beg the author not to issue knives, or not to issue big knives. I don't ask for a quick update. I just hope that this book can end with an excellent, complete, and gratifying ending. I think this is the most logical novel I have read, with the most normal protagonist, and the most consistent environment and background. It requires some understanding and a lot of historical knowledge reserves. There is no doubt that this book can be regarded as a god among novels in this genre. What I said is, if you don't accept it, come to a duel.

The waves of history sweep across every reader who enters the novel, and the weight of revolutionary history is vividly depicted at this moment. The most touching book is not just the characters, but also the world outside the novel.

This book is very interesting, the plot is very solid, the subject matter is novel, and the characters are well created. The characters and countries are perfectly portrayed in the article, and there will be no half-knowledge. The author has rich historical and political knowledge and has his own opinions on history and politics. There is nothing poisonous about this book. As long as it doesn't fall apart at the end, it's perfect. My opinion, don't comment. I've been watching it for more than a year and I'm quite satisfied. They are also among the few who have seen it till now and are not dead.

After reading more than half of it, I feel that overall it is okay. The focus is on writing feelings and atmosphere. Although there are some flaws, the overall plot is in line with normal performance. There are a lot of military weapons in the article, which may seem a bit overwhelming. There are also many angles in the narrative of the war, so it will not be boring to watch. In terms of the world view, it is also unique, with crises and progress in the plot, and no emotional surprises. I just hope that the plot in the later stages can grasp the technological narrative rhythm of pre-civilization and modern civilization. There are already some obvious traces of separation in the places I have seen so far. I hope that the rhythm of the plot can be grasped while maintaining a harmonious look and feel. [Like][Like][Like]

It is a very good book, but a large part of the reason why the rating cannot reach 9.0 Is that the author did not deal with typos, and the expression of some sentences and plots is also very confusing, leaving readers to guess. This is not to say that readers are not willing to use their brains to read books, but it is to hope that the author can pay attention to details, spend some time polishing the work, and make the article clearer, so as not to live up to the potential of this book, so that good works can attract more readers.

This book really appeals to my tastes. Industry, artillery, lolita, and vampires make both military fans and LLK deeply immersed in it. Highly recommended, thank you to the author! ! ! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It is an excellent book. If I were to give it a rating, I would give it 9.0+. The logic and organization in the book are quite clear, and the author has obviously understood and even studied many things. Highly recommended to watch. At the same time, the properties of Qingbai are also very good flavoring agents. It feels like a cup of mellow black coffee with a touch of milk. I personally like this feeling.

Well, this is the best one I've ever seen on the reform of another world [Chigua] I have one thing to say, it feels like it could be more everyday or something [exploration]

Generally speaking, there are no big problems. The writing is good, but the poisonous point is the Japanese. There is no problem in creating the villain, but the system given to him is a kind of succubus pattern, which makes people look very uncomfortable. I don't want him to live so well. There are no other problems.

This is a rare good book about farming. There is nothing wrong with it except that the pace is a little fast. It is worth reading. The author's writing skills are online and can give you a sense of generational difference in the Civilization series (or in other words, the research all of Steel Four). Climbing the technology tree is also more logical, not a hammer here and there. Looking forward to it 😋

Really very beautiful The author's narrative style is very interesting. Most of the time, the perspective is on Alice, and sometimes the entire event is viewed from an individual or macro-external perspective. It expands the entire story content quite fully. In terms of writing style, the author's words make me feel like I am reading a history book, "Aimee Lanxi Modern History", supplemented by detailed analysis; it reads a bit like Liu.

I have been thinking about writing this kind of article for a long time, but someone actually wrote it. It is very well written. The heroine of the vampire family and the industrial revolution in the magical world can be said to have hit my sweet spot. Five-star praise.

This book is indeed very good, at least the subject matter is novel enough and the content is quite rich, but I always feel that something is missing, that is, contradictory and contradictory things. I have a novel with similar themes on my bookshelf. Although it has been discontinued, I feel that it can still be used as a reference. I hope the author can learn from it, and I also hope that this book will not be discontinued.

This book gives me a good impression 1. I feel that the author has put a lot of effort into this book. He must have spent a lot of time researching information, and he must at least have an in-depth understanding of many fields of knowledge. 2. This book is very creative, many things gave me a refreshing feeling, and the plot content is also quite good. 3. The author's writing style is quite good, but the author's writing style is suitable for writing short stories or news reports. The handling of the plot is not very good. Each part is taken apart and written well, but when connected together, it does not feel very coherent. It pays great attention to the macro narrative and writes out the sense of fate between the era and the individual, but the details are not well handled and are rather scattered.

Super pretty! This is my first time to review this book, five stars.

The fantasy world of another world is undergoing rapid transformation and industrialization✘ In the lost colony of humanity in the distant and dark 40th millennium, ignorance and ignorance shroud the remnants of humanity in the golden age... ✔ (Vaguely contains the following elements: Home + Stars + Warhammer + Arknights + Halo, etc.) Since that day, I have never found such a book on Tomato, only Honghe can compare with it🥲 It really includes everything that little boys like, such as the huge science fiction background, gun and ship, sweet-smelling and soft cute girls...