Ye Luoli: First Love, Clear Wine

How should I put it? The author has made up for the shortcomings of the original drama very well, and also brought forward the advantages of the original drama very well. The key is that this writing style is top-notch among Ye Luoli fan fiction!

It's been a long time since I read this book before I write a review. First of all, overall it's really good! ! This is definitely one of the best Ye Luoli fanfics I have ever read. There were many novels that I couldn't stand after reading them for a while, but I have been following this one, staying up late to catch up [laughing and crying]. The author's writing style is really good, it is not boring to read, it is engaging, and the funny parts are really funny, and the serious parts are also unambiguous. There are many descriptions of the scenes and processes of the battles of Ye Luoli warriors that are really graphic and detailed. It can be seen that the author has learned and prepared a lot in advance, which is great! The plot is handled very well. Shui Mo has a sweet love relationship and doesn't neglect his career. Watching their sweet love story made my mouth fly to the sky. The most important thing is that this water prince is not oily! (I watched the domineering Prince Water before and it made me autistic. He has clear water. How can he be oily?) The pace of the plot is fast and not draggy. Some of the added settings are very interesting and make the plot more reasonable. There is an unexpected and reasonable feeling. The characters are also well described. I really love Mo Mo, who is beautiful, sassy, ​​powerful, and interesting. The descriptions of other characters are also very vivid and full, and each one has his or her own characteristics. In terms of character relationships, the bullies have not been whitewashed, and the friendship between Ye Luoli and the warriors has not dissipated. Even if times have passed and we meet again, we can still be good friends who can fight side by side and have a tacit understanding. I really like this feeling. The friendship between Nana and Mo Mo is the best in the world! Finally, I have to praise the author's writing style. When I read it, I exclaimed countless times, "You are really good at writing." It is not childish like a primary school student writing essays, and there are many places that are so beautifully described that I can just copy the notes. I hope the author can take a good rest and recover as soon as possible. Taking good care of yourself is the most important thing! Looking forward to the day when normal updates resume [blowing kiss] Come on, duck✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I accidentally discovered this book from the author's perspective. At first, I just read it with the mood of eating candy, but as the plot deepened, I found that the author's integration of the background and the original work was very logical, just like Mo's identity. Why was it once ordinary? Because it was her mother who prevented Mo from being snatched away and asked Mo to be low-key in everything. Just be regular. I really like this setting. [Adoration] The setting of the four major aristocratic families and the eight wealthy families also brings in Gao Taiming and Chen Sisi. The author is not just limited to Mo, but writes from the perspective of a group portrait, but also highlights the style of Mo's heroine. Ye Luoli's team went crazy and made trouble together, reached for the stars and the moon together, and went into the sea together. The youthful like-mindedness described the friendship in a very passionate way. (I used to particularly like group portrait articles. Who knows how excited I felt when I saw Ye Luoli's team [Admiration] [Shyness] This article is shaped from the three aspects of family, friendship, and love, and Shuimo has no shortage of sugar, and the plot is rare in fan fiction that can withstand in-depth exploration. Wow, wow, wow, I really love the author, and the author must have put a lot of effort into this article. I really like it very much. I haven't followed an article like this in a long time. I wish the author a great article🔥. If I haven't read this fanfic, I will be really sad. It's so sweet that I can't stop talking about Shuimo's scenes. The author's writing style is also very good, and it's a skilled one. The descriptions are particularly beautiful. I love it to death [Adoration] Show them all to me! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Super pretty! ! ! The ending comes to an abrupt end, and the story is full of excitement and excitement! I love such free and easy silence and the water rushing to each other! The story is wonderful and the logic is smooth. It transitions from childhood love to universal love, human darkness and human glory, fairy preference and fairy compassion. The group portrait article and the heroine can coexist in one article. The tacit understanding of Ye Luoli's team and the nirvana of the heroine are really amazing! ! ! It's so beautiful. Why is such a well-written article rated so low (ಥ_ಥ)

There are few authors with good writing skills. I like this Mobao hahaha. The random thoughts are very cute and I like it. Although the writing is slow, each chapter has 4,000 words! Looking forward to the next plot! [Blowing kiss]

Saw it from the first chapter. Really nice to look at. There is no definition of a big heroine. The love in this book is love and a double success in career. To be honest, I have been reading a lot of books with big heroines. It seems that there is always no man in her heart, only career, and she is the heroine. With this kind of love and career, some people call her a little white heroine. I think there is no definition between the big heroine and the little white heroine. And the writing here is very proactive. Watching our main drama, Brother Shui is the one who takes the initiative. Now I feel like he's super proactive since Mo Mo's temperament changed! ! It's really easy to take the initiative, but it's just too big. [Hold face] I was honestly embarrassed to watch it in the cinema. [Hold face] [Hold face] Overall, it's great. I would like to say a word to Mo Mo for the main drama. In this era where big heroines are the mainstream, please give the little white-flowered heroine a chance to survive.

I really like this Mobo! I hope the author will update as soon as possible!

It's very good-looking. The author made up for the shortcomings of the original comic and made the heroine stronger to match the water prince.

Highly recommended, it's really good-looking, the content is really novel and interesting, there are so many jokes in the book, the fights are really funny, and the ending of the main text is also very good. The only regret is the lifespan theory of humans and fairies. Shui Mo is really annoying, but the lifespan theory really hit me. I really cried at the ending of the extra chapter, everyone left. Shuishui could only find Momo alone, and she really cried because of the knife. Although the final ending is in the form of OE, I believe it can be he. I believe Shuishui can definitely find Momo, and everyone can come back together to live and play together [air kiss]

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, super good looking! ! ! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

Come on, this is my favorite Ye Luoli fanfic so far. I really like it.