Rusty Sword

The level is very high, and there are no flaws in the logic. The story adds a lot of thought to the old-fashioned ones, such as multi-line narrative, timeline narrative, etc. The writing style is also very good. After a few hundred chapters, I can see the author's progress. I really admire it with my superficial reading level. The only question is, will the male protagonist's strength be too overwhelming? Does the author want to express Laozi's way of conforming to nature, "Human only does not fight, so all things cannot fight with it"? This aspect is also very innovative, and the high praise cannot be overstated!

It's really good. The author's writing style is very good in Tomato. He also uses several narrative perspectives to write the story, and interjects narration in the middle to make the story fuller. It's really good, but there are too few, and it's not enough to read [crying] Also, there are many authors out there. In addition, this book has several aliases. I recommended it to my friend, and he said he couldn't find it. I think this may be the reason why the author's book is not so popular.

Cow cow cow To be honest, this book should not be in Tomato, The plot is compact and clever, even with twists and turns One of the few small obstacles is that the interspersed article is not too short. It is not a short memory, but a relatively long paragraph, which can actually be written into two books or a prequel and a sequel. For those of us who have read the final book, it's okay, but it does make my head hurt to follow the story. Originally, there was only one picture a day, or two or three, or even one picture every few days. It was really a bit brain-burning to have to distinguish between the previous story line and the later story line! But no matter in terms of writing and plot, this book is very interesting. The score of 9.3 Is definitely buried. Putting aside some novices and readers who have no idea to give low scores, even including this blocking point, I feel it is still at 9.8 Such a rating of 9.7. I haven't finished it yet, this is one of the few movies I still want to read, but I'll rate it now. Okay, I finally know why the rating is so low... I wonder if the author has any quirks? Is life unsatisfactory or what should I say? I came here to follow the author's other books. The one I wrote before was pretty good, but the character died inexplicably. Although the finale brings it full circle, right? It's okay to be rescued... I opened this newer book than that one because I wanted to write about a few sick people... It's not the kind that the villain uses to show off and slap the protagonist in the face, nor is it because the author's writing skills are not good enough to write exciting stories and wonderful characters... It even feels like the author is just here to disgust people... This is a light-hearted novel, right? But can I understand Jianghu if you are fighting? How is it possible that no one died... You can be less skilled than others, right? Even if you are beaten to death, you can also be plotted against. It is impossible to guard against it. You have to do something disgusting... Your book's rating is low, are you happy? Is it disgusting and makes readers happy? It doesn't mean that you have to follow the reader's wishes, just write all kinds of big team-ups and write the kind of hero who is invincible... Your villain can be resourceful or even sinister and vicious, but you have to write only one character, just one who is sick?

This book gave me a very unique experience. The compact plot, dense conflicts, simple story, ingenious foreshadowing, relaxed narrative style and characters carrying rich emotions all amazed me. It has neither the deep-seated hatred in the Book of the Dead nor the heavy themes of the underworld, but it can also use a well-designed story to let people experience the grace of swords. I hope the author will persevere, even in an increasingly complicated environment - only excellent works can withstand the consideration of time and be remembered by readers. To say the writing is good is indeed an exaggeration. It is true that the author's narrative level is quite high, but it was too difficult for me to find a memorable scene in my mind. I really can't see the description of the environment and the description of the scene. If I say how majestic the dragon veins should be depicted, then I can only say - I can't do it [face covering]

It is a very good book. The whole book is foreshadowed by "Sword Language". This "Sword Language" was written by the compiler and it is related to immortals. The identity of the male protagonist is very important and will be revealed in the end. The heroine's life experience is explained relatively early. There are many foreshadowings throughout the whole text. It can be said that the author has a great sense of writing. Of course, this article is also a book that should be read carefully. If you can't calm down to read this book, you will skip it in a hurry. I can't appreciate the excitement of the foreshadowing. The male protagonist's background is considered to be the most powerful sect in the world. The female protagonist has a master who is very capable of calculation. The female protagonist is very stubborn and persistent, while the male protagonist is lazy, just like the lazy dog mentioned in the book. The two complement each other. In a sense, the male protagonist is also a henpeck, haha. After all, he has been kept busy by the female protagonist for 3 years. Haha, he originally wanted to do whatever he wanted. There will be interludes in the text to continue the previous stories to pave the way for explanations. Book friends who want to read it must not skip it because there will be foreshadowing in it. It can be said that the writing style of this book is sufficient, the foreshadowing is sufficient, and it is plentiful but not cluttered. It can definitely be called a good book. I didn't expect that there is such a book in Tomato now. It can be said that it has been buried here. Because most readers of Tomato are a little naive or impetuous and want to read it without thinking. Of course, I can only say that most of them. There are also many readers who are also old bookworms and will enjoy reading it. Tomato is really a flavoring agent, both good and bad. I personally recommend it to old bookworms. I believe that if you can read it to the end, the book you have read should not be bad.

A rare good martial artist. The whole story is full of twists and turns, and many of the inconspicuous foreshadowings at the beginning need to be withdrawn very late. For example, the Pill-Splitting Sword that appeared in the first chapter was inconspicuous, but who would have thought that it would take until the last chapter to know that it hinted at the protagonist's life experience. In addition, there is a plot that I really like, which is the plot where the male protagonist and the female protagonist fall in love and kill each other. It's really interesting that the male and female protagonists are "hostile" to each other in the early stage, and then later they are suspicious of each other and pull and test each other! There is another way of writing this book that I like very much, which is to tell the stories of several legendary characters through "Sword Language" to answer questions in the plot. Moreover, the story of "Sword Language" is very well written, and several chapters are very impressive, such as "Holy Sword Ling Han", "Holy Sword Lu He" (Gao Xue and Ye Weiqing are the truly admirable heroines! Female fans should learn from it!) And "Devil Sword Six Paths" (the ending is unexpected). Finally, the male and female protagonists have high IQ, martial arts, moral character and good looks. They are currently my favorite couple in martial arts novels.

The angle is very strange, and the interweaving of the main plot with the sword language chapters is also very clever. It can both hint at the mystery and lay the groundwork for the following chapters. Overall, there are no unreasonable logical contradictions and plot holes. The omniscient perspective of the sword language creates a complete and self-consistent logical chain, and it is difficult to find fault with the party. Of course, I very much hope that the author can go further and create a more grand and rich world of rivers and lakes. I also hope that the author can write more delicate and rich emotions in terms of emotions (the love between the protagonist and the heroine can of course be rational love, but more complex and rich emotions are more attractive and can create a flesh-and-blood world of rivers and lakes, right?) Overall, the author has a lot of room for improvement, and I am still very optimistic about it. (Also: Has anyone read Jiuzhou Piaomiaolu? I accidentally read my brother's book when I was a child. Many of them are about Jianghu, which is very attractive)

Great book! Nice! Love watching! This is definitely the best fairy grass I have read in online novels in the past ten or twenty years! Miao Miao Miao! Let me tell you slowly: 1. First of all, let me tell you how I discovered this book. I went to post forums to search for books with a single female protagonist and a good plot. I saw someone recommending this book. After reading it, I forgot all about eating and sleeping, and couldn't extricate myself! In terms of the love between children in male novels, I would like to call it "the best portrayal of a female protagonist in the online literature world", "the pinnacle of a single female protagonist in the online literature world", and "the best dog food in large quantities" in my mind! 2. If it starts with "appearance" at the beginning, then it means being loyal to "talent"! I would summarize it as: "A thoughtful book written by a thoughtful author"! ! ! From trivial matters to major events in the world, from the love between children to the great avenues of the world, the article all reveals the author's deep understanding of people, things, feelings, and ways. Only such an author can write such a good book! I am very willing to recommend this book and use the author's insights to make friends with all the kings and gods! 3. Next is the carrot and cabbage part. I always like to read brain-burning things, and I don't like harem stallions nor desireless ruthlessness. This book is my favorite, but it is suspenseful and brain-burning, and the narration and flashbacks are ingenious. It has a martial arts spirit but is not rigid and pedantic. Not everyone likes this type. When reading this book, you must calm down and read it attentively! Finally, another piece of advice: novice readers should not read this! Those looking for a cool article to pass the time should read it with caution! Those who appreciate this fairy grass must remember: the paragraph comments are for reference only, do not jump to conclusions (many paragraph comments are "unreasonable" questions raised due to carelessness in reading the book), remember to keep your own thinking, and leave it to be deciphered and discussed later! In addition, since many people had negative comments about the heroine in the early stage, even if it is a slight spoiler, I have to say it! In the early stage, you only need to think about the heroine's situation as an undercover agent and her deliberate shooting of the sword, and you can ignore those "straightforward" doubts. As for the heroine's outlook on life, it will become more complete as many subsequent plots unfold. There is no right or wrong in the three views. Once you really look into it, put yourself in their shoes and imagine the people and things at that time, it is not too late to discuss it.

I finally finished watching it, and the protagonist Ye Qingzhou really impressed me. Chic and unrestrained yet practical, elegant yet steady. For those who say that since you lie down, you should stand by and watch, I can only say that kind hearts are not everywhere in the mountains, but they are like stars lighting up the dark night. Your exquisite self-interest does not prevent others from wanting to benefit the world. Secondly, I also like Yue Yanyao very much. He looks like the moon covered by light clouds, and flutters like the snow covered by the flowing wind. The emotional scene was a little delayed at the beginning, but once both parties knew each other's identities, it got on the right track and was sweet and sweet. The strategic layout, supporting role creation, touching heart and soul, flow through the whole text. Overall, this book is very open [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Full marks must be full marks, the whole book is a multi-perspective narrative. The protagonist and heroine are the main perspective, and each story in "Sword Language" is a sub-perspective. "Sword Language" covers five hundred years (actually three hundred years, the earliest one is written by Li Xuanxin) to explain the background and foreshadowing of different eras. I really like the stories in it, including Peiran Wu Ming, Zhezheng Duan Xun, Immortal Jealousy Li Xuanxin, Holy Sword Dew and Ye Weiqing, Excalibur King Transformed into Li Cheng, and the story of Ye Weiqing that impressed me the most [crying]. The setting of the protagonist is very interesting. He has a lazy personality, is happy-go-lucky, and has a chivalrous heart. What is even more rare is that the protagonist has this character from the beginning to the end and has not changed due to experience. The setting of the heroine is also very interesting. From the beginning of "Ji Gongzi", a murderous and decisive workaholic, to the end she has the same character, she changes to a character who is willing to compromise for the protagonist. The male and female protagonists' changes in their thoughts are very real [shy]. Zhuge You died in the early stages of the book, but he still appears in the middle and late stages of the book. There are also some poisonous points. If you tap the acupoint without cutting the shoujiao, it will always slow down the enemy.

There is not much to say, the plot is compact, there are many foreshadowings, the writing is excellent, and all the foreshadowings are recycled. The narrative techniques are too essential, and the sword language and each incident complement each other. The only shortcoming is that there are not many negative lines such as the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. It can also be written with some sadistic sweetness or emotional misunderstandings. I like to watch it! (But I don't write negative lines now, the main lines are written very well [send heart]). It's a pity that I didn't wait until I finished the book to read it. I can only say that I couldn't get enough of it. It's very fascinating. After reading every chapter, I feel like I'm still unfinished. I want to continue reading. I'm about to catch up to the third chapter. I feel like I'll be anxious to death waiting for the update! ! ! ! ! ! ! . There is nothing to say, I can only describe it with perfect score (I wish I could read 1,000 chapters in one day, but it's a pity that I haven't finished it yet [crying][crying][crying])

Reasons for recommendation to book lovers: 1. The supporting characters are detailed and flesh-and-blood; 2. The plot is compact, full of foreshadowing and just right; 3. The writing contains an understanding of human nature, unlike some articles where you get nothing after reading them. 4. It's hard to calm down. The story about the little village master of Zifei Village and the secret of Pei Ran is very well written. Overall, this book is not at the same level as Tomato (it may be that I haven't read it enough, at least many of the popular books with high scores are not as good as this one). If you are a book lover, you need to be more patient in the early stage. If you don't understand, you can read the paragraphs or ask questions. Suggestions for authors: (relative to excellent works) 1. The portrayal of the protagonist is not full enough (the protagonist is naturally more demanding than the supporting role), and there is a suspicion of excessive pursuit of "smartness". I hope the author can strengthen the description. Sometimes it is better to express it directly than to reflect it through behavior. 2. The overall plot in the latter part (currently more than 5,000 pages) focuses too much on romance and ignores the "jianghu" and "misty rain" (such as trivial matters in folk life without intrigues, and the difficulty of settling wishes). 3. In the early stage, there is a feeling similar to that of a profound classic, which makes it difficult to persist in reading to the end. Unless you read it in one go, it will be difficult to retrieve it after a sudden interruption. Normally, you should give a context through the chapter names.

Every foreshadowing you see will be recycled, and some undiscovered foreshadowings will suddenly be realized in the end. This is already an excellent advantage in Tomato. The setting of Sword Language can be said to have good and bad points. Some people may not be able to adapt to such perspective switching, but multiple perspectives and multiple timelines can make the story line more complete. It can be said that there are no big problems with the logic, and many of the characters have online IQs. The author's ancient Chinese writing skills and various allusions still really amazed me. Even with its shortcomings, it is still a good book. It is a good book

I have finished reading a book that is worth reading in detail. The timeline is interspersed without skipping chapters. You may read a small part of the latter part faster but it is innocuous. If you read my review, I can give you some reading tips. It may be a small spoiler but I will not talk about the main content: 1. The male and female protagonists have no amnesia in the whole process and there are no abuse points. They recognized each other's identity in the first part and are not imbeciles. IQ is online and EQ is online. There is no death in the whole process, so there is no need to worry about tragedy. 2. The male protagonist is very strong. Although he is a lazy dog, he can enter the top ranking in the beginning of the battle. The female protagonist is not a flower vase but also has the strength in the top ranking. The male protagonist has learned a lot of martial arts and is already at the top of the top ranking in the middle and late stages. In the end, his strength must be number one. Don't worry about being a loser. The female protagonist has never suffered a big loss in the whole challenge of the top ranking (she has suffered losses in the top few on the top ranking but it is not a problem, and the same goes for the male protagonist) 3. The confidants and no spies refer to the master, father-in-law, family, brothers, sisters, sisters, and brothers, and Zhuge You is a good person, so there is no need to worry about the heroine and the master being a villain. 4. The single female protagonist is a bit sweet in the middle and later stages, and the emotional line is good. 5. The emperor doesn't have much of a role, it's just used to advance the main plot (not even as many of his uncles as the chapters that refer to a few princes), and Cui Yan, the treacherous minister, also doesn't have much of a role. I hope you can read this comment with a happy mood. The reason why I read the next few pictures quickly is because I was afraid that someone would die or there would be no trusted villains, etc., So just read patiently. (2025.3.12)

Good books shouldn't be buried. It's been a long time since I've read a book so happily. What amazes me most about this book is how interlocking the plot is. Behind one strange case after another, we clearly know that there is a pair of big hands controlling everything, but each time the protagonist can only solve part of the puzzle. By the end of the ending, all the foreshadowings are taken away, and all the above puzzles have a reasonable explanation. The protagonists and villains in the book are also very resourceful, and the Machiavellian battles of wits at least made me enjoy watching them. The sword language interludes in each article explain a certain event from a God's perspective. It can be seen that the author has already planned the overall plot. An inadvertent sentence in the early stage can be the foreshadowing of something later. For an author who writes an outline before starting the book, the plot part is definitely blameless. When I read many other books, I often see the term "little white text" from book friends, but I think that the plot of this book is so subversive, compact, and full of climaxes that it definitely does not belong to the "little white text" category. Let's talk about my favorite relationship between the male and female protagonists. I think this book is completely to my liking at this point. I always believe that true love can start from love at first sight, but it will never be because of love at first sight, or because you saved my life. Love and marriage take a long time to come. It is a conclusion drawn from constant observation of oneself and each other. In the context of this book, it is also the unforgettable experiences of life and death that bind the male and female protagonists together and become what I consider to be a divine couple. In the end, it is through the mouth of the male protagonist that I fully express my views on love. Overall, the emotional lines are not abrupt and natural, and have a natural feeling. Looking at them just makes me wish them well. Finally, let's talk about the shortcomings of this book. I think there are two points in general. One is that the author is obviously not good at martial arts, and the martial arts is a little less thrilling, but it's innocuous. The battle of wits is exciting enough; the other is that because of the emphasis on battle of wits, it is inevitable to avoid the problem-in the plot In my opinion, there are many logical flaws in many places when I read it for the first time, but fortunately, they are basically self-explanatory, or I put down my phone and thought about it carefully. It does make sense. In my impression, there are very few logical flaws that are too far-fetched, and they are within the acceptable range. However, many book friends commented on the logical flaws, many of which were caused by not reading the previous article carefully. Therefore, you really need to be smart when reading this book! I hope that the next book that the author said in the last post will be released in October can be realized as soon as possible (it is already December). I am very optimistic about the author. I hope that the author can support himself well in real life and write more excellent works!

First of all, I think the plot is very novel, not trivial, and the characters are relatively fleshed out. Regarding what some people say about the collapse of the character, or the lack of logic, I can only say that they may have not recovered their brains stored elsewhere. The male protagonist is a lazy dog, or a person who has no desires and desires, but he is very sad for the people around him. This is why the male protagonist will do some tasks that he thinks are not dangerous for his future wife and year-end friends. At the end, it vividly demonstrates what it means if you don't look for trouble, trouble will come to you. This does not violate the male protagonist's attributes as a lazy dog, but rather highlights his responsibility to himself and the people around him. In terms of the plot, a lot of "Sword Language" is interspersed, which not only relieves fatigue, but also shows the images of many different characters, supplements the background, and explains the main line of the story. It is obvious that I wrote an outline instead of deliberately filling in the holes one by one. The connection is very smooth. There are also a lot of fun spots, and it's not completely boring. Mainly using a selective omniscient perspective, following the protagonist to find the villain lurking in the dark little by little. This is actually a bit difficult, and it is easy to feel confused along with the protagonist. This is like a problem encountered in life that is difficult to visualize and find a solution to. But one by one, the unrelated branch lines slowly made the main line clear. This made me think of "the boat will straighten out when it reaches the bridge." This realization also made me feel more relieved as the male protagonist in my life. There is no drag at the end, no endless copy. Not only does it give the story a happy ending, it also fills in the pitfalls at the beginning.

Single woman, no ambiguity, good writing and plot, many riddles The heroine is a combination of beauty, strength, intelligence, and planning. She has the world in mind, but she is not a completely kind-hearted person. She will ruthlessly sacrifice, deceive, or plot against a small number of innocent people for the overall situation. She also has many innocent lives on her hands. She also has obvious weaknesses: she is stubborn and is prone to being knocked down. There have been several times when the author made the heroine underestimate the enemy for the sake of the plot or something else, and made the heroine feel favorably. The male protagonist is well portrayed. He is open-minded and always optimistic. He makes himself happy and enjoys life. He is self-centered. He is completely opposite to the female protagonist. He only does things within his own capabilities. Even after seeing two-thirds of it, the male and female protagonists are still weak in martial arts and cannot keep up with the crises that fill the world. The timeline of the male and female protagonists' relationship progress is a bit long. This novel feels like it should be classified as a martial arts novel. At least I saw that there are only more than a hundred chapters left. It has no signs of entering the realm of immortality. It is just a bit of catching up with the wind and a little footprint. If it is an immortal novel, the transition is too slow. There are too many knives to eat. The author gave many knives to many supporting characters [I almost cried]. It's not very sad, just a little uncomfortable! The author's ability to fill holes is first-rate

The writing is reasonable and interesting, and the characters in the book are distinctive and lifelike. [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] There are very few reviews for this book, but it is precisely because of this that the discussion atmosphere in the comment area and book friend circles is very strong. Every time I discuss it with book friends, it feels like I am investigating a case! So cool! !

T0 divine book, unfortunately it can only be awarded ten points at most Taken together, there are only two small flaws. One is that the final ending is slightly fast-paced, and the other is that Wang Can did not become an immortal in the end. I very much hope that the author can write a few extra chapters to enrich the ending. Wang Can can complete his merits and become an immortal by completely destroying the bone-changing demon. Tips before viewing: The male and female protagonists have full luck, and there are almost no swords in the main plot, so you can watch it with confidence I can think of a better plot in which Wang Can becomes an immortal: A few years after Wang Can was defeated by Jiang Yezhou, the Yinghuan Sword was completely rusted, and its life span was nearing its end. When he was sitting and looking at the vast sea, he suddenly realized: He is the only one who cannot fight, so no one in the world can fight with him. His sharp edge was reduced but the lead was washed away. He took a step forward with his sword, opened the gate of heaven, and ascended to immortality. This writing echoes He Wen's statement in the preface to the first chapter of the Sword Language that any weapon will rust, and that the essence of a rusted weapon is that "it is the only one who cannot fight with it, so no one in the world can fight with it."

Finally finished reading it, it is indeed a good book. There are no "cool" passages deliberately created. The tone of the entire book, from story development to character creation to emotional lines, is as relaxed and free as the protagonist's character. Some of the intellectual battles are far-fetched, but the overall quality is still online, much better than a mindless and refreshing novel. The sword language is used as an interlude to supplement the description. In most cases, the insertion is a bit abrupt, but as long as you have the patience to read it carefully, it is a good story. I quite like this calm narrative style, but it may be a bit boring for some people to read.

I really like this kind of narrative method. The content is novel and has the charm of classics. This is my first time to write a review book. It's really great. Good luck, author✊.

I followed the previous one, and it is also a very good book. You can see traces of traditional martial arts in the writing style. The overall style is more like Gu Long, but it also has a cultural accumulation similar to that of Jin Yong (for example, foodies are particular about hhhh). In this way, it should be considered to be almost the same age. The narrative structure has the shadow of Detective Di Renjie, so it can also be said to be a mystery written in a martial arts style. There are probably one or two plots that I personally find toxic (this is the same as the original). I felt that the ending was a little sloppy, which is not to say that the author was not careful. The main problem is that whether it was Zhuge You's death or the male and female protagonists' efforts to mediate the rebellion, the core was more grand. At the end, the mystery was finally revealed and it was revealed that the conflict throughout the whole text was only about Wang Can, which made it feel like a fragmentation. To use an inappropriate analogy, most of the first part is The Legend of the Condor Heroes, but at the end it ends with a happy hero. I prefer the following three reasons. First, the author wants to express a lot of connotations but has not made a good choice. The core suspense throughout the whole text is actually the life experience of the male protagonist, that is, the conflict between Wang Can and the male protagonist. However, there is too little emphasis on this point in the previous article, which makes the ending seem abrupt. The second is the separation between the content of cultivating immortals and martial arts. The cultivating of immortals ends abruptly as soon as it begins, which will also make people feel abrupt. The third is the genre restriction of online articles. After all, the author must be right. Finally, even though I wrote such a long paragraph of complaints at the end, it is actually not a good book and I would not be willing to spend so long writing such a thankless book review. The quality of the entire book is quite high in my opinion, and I still hope that the author can keep up the good work.

The logic is smooth, the male and female protagonists have both IQ and EQ, and the story is a little sweet. It is very interesting and highly recommended. Except for the slightly abrupt ending, I feel that the whole logic has basically no weaknesses. The only question is why the heroine's mother is such a beautiful woman in a small fishing village. It should be noted that the husband is not guilty of the crime of having a treasure. If her husband is just an ordinary person, she would have been snatched away long ago. If her husband is a hermit expert like the male protagonist, he should not die without a sound. This is a point that confuses me, but it doesn't stop it from being a wonderfully edited novel. It's much better than the current multi-million-word running novels.

It's good to watch, especially good [Flying Kiss]. It took me a week to read it. There is nothing to say about the plot. There are a lot of foreshadowings, so I have to read it slowly. Volume 1 is amazing, and volume 2 is a little dull. Volume 3, I personally feel a bit boring, so I read it faster. I feel the next two volumes are similar to volume 2. The ending is a bit sloppy. I like the character of the heroine very much. She is not that kind of young lady. The two of them are strong men and have experienced a lot together. The emotional scenes I have seen before are usually awkward, but this one is just right. The intrigue in it is also very powerful. It is one of the few things in Tomato that you need to read with your brain. Speaking of which, it is also my first time to read martial arts. In my opinion, this book is really the pinnacle of Tomato. The only flaw is that the author only wrote an extra chapter. I still want to read Tiantian [crazy]

Judging from the writing style alone, it is also a rare good book. The narrative rhythm is stable, and the conspiracy is very interesting and not blunt. But there is another important emotional line that I personally cannot accept. After Chen Wangyan expressed his views on the emotional line in the middle chapter, I jumped directly to the last scene to see the ending of the male and female protagonists. After two or three hundred chapters (a plot I didn't see), the two people actually said that they could pretend for three years. I really... Maybe it's the interest between the couple, but I personally can't bear it. I say goodbye to read the author's next book, but for readers who can tolerate it, this will be a super good book. Five stars are not enough to express my love. I came back after reading the book by the author The Lord of Time. I must admit that the author's view of love is more mature and realistic than mine. After the intense hormones subside, the water flows slowly and feels comfortable. It can withstand the test of ordinary life day after day. It makes my fantasies about love and family more real. But in this book, it starts with conspiracy and calculation, turns with mutual embarrassment by exposing secrets, and progresses with the hero "abandoning his ideals and beliefs" to help the heroine achieve her goal. I still can't accept it. (After seeing King Chen's Banquet, I stopped watching it. Maybe there will be a series of plot twists in the later chapters, proving that the male protagonist has to fight hard, but the first two are still obstacles that I can't get over) Finally, I love you, author, and your writing is so good~(*＾3＾)/~♡

A martial arts novel in the guise of a fairy, with a very novel narrative technique. The plot is also quite good. It's a bit of a waste to put it on Tomato. If it were released on other platforms and the length was longer, the results would probably be better [Like] [Like]

A novel that takes place from multiple angles is very charming and high-quality. Some of the unwritten scenes should have been imagined by myself, but this novel has written from multiple angles to complete the picture. It is a surprise. Some are similar to what I guessed, and some memories unfolded in different directions from what I thought. It allowed me to see different stories with multiple ideas. There is fantasy but not fantasy. The author's imagination is amazing and surprising. Surprisingly, he really stayed in this world and did not ascend to the messy links one after another. Very good, looking forward to the next book

It's so good. Tomato is also a pick-me-up. The logic is rigorous and full of chivalry and wisdom. It uses suspense reasoning as the theme and combines the immortal and the mortal. It is really enjoyable! ! ! The unique perspective of sword language makes people want to watch it! It's such a pity for Huang Qi [crying] [crying] [crying] Ye Weiqing's extra chapter is so good, full of cologne flavor. "Can't get" and "lost" are so impressive [crying] [crying]

It is an excellent work that far exceeds ordinary online novels. It is worth reading more. The plot is smooth and exciting, and the writing is excellent. The author wrote the whole story with great care, and it also contains many of the author's thoughts and insights. The entire world created includes rivers and lakes, temples, and every character has flesh and blood. The many interspersed short stories greatly enrich the layering of the full text, and are recycled as an overall structure. It is a very careful design. Unfortunately, many readers just skim the comments and often fail to realize that the author has a designed writing style for every sentence. This kind of work requires leisure time and concentration to read. It is quite different from the mainstream fast-food style of online novels today. The ups and downs of the plot design will make it more difficult to read. It will lead to a small audience, which is a pity, but I sincerely hope that there will be more such fine novels, and it will be really enjoyable to read. The author seems to have finished writing. I hope that when I have the opportunity to take some time off from my busy schedule in the future, if I am still interested, I can create more wonderful novels like this. I am also grateful to the author for providing such a wonderful work for me to read.

It is very well written, and many of the author's thoughts coincide with mine. Although this is not a simple martial arts, nor is it a fairy tale, I still like the author's writing style and the final result. Moreover, the author's layout and cause and effect of the whole text amaze me. I haven't read such a high-quality article for a long time. Moreover, the idea of ​​a new book that the author plans to write to start a war with AI also makes me feel that it is consistent with my belief that AI cannot replace human beings.