Nightmare Cross

I only use four words to describe it, wonderful. This book is one of the best in my 3000 hours of online reading. From the countless foreshadowings in the early stage to the later stages, it almost forms a perfect logical closed loop, as well as the collision of causality, time ethics, technology and magic, and countless reversals that make my scalp numb again and again. It can really be regarded as a Tomato T0 level.

Very shocking... So far, it can be said that it is the only Western fantasy novel that I can read and be addicted to. Before this, I never thought that I would like a Western fantasy so much. All the foreshadowing can be recycled, some places that I think are unreasonable can be filled in later, and the plot and settings are like a fairy... I think this combination of science fiction and Western District is simply too charming. There is also a rare three-dimensional view of the Internet, and the male and female protagonists have enough roles, the interactions are very vivid, and the IQs of the male and female protagonists and the villains will not drop... Is this an online article that I deserve to read? No more talking, come on, author!

Perfect setting and structure, but I want to say that a sad and perfect ending might be better. You are too gentle, author. The author is a bit lacking. Maybe you should have more expressions, more exaggerated but logical expressions, maybe make this character more vivid? The last few dialogues seem to be just describing the setting. Although the setting is amazing, after talking about the skills, it is best to add a description of the environment. If it is meaningful, it will probably leave the reader more interested. Overall, the setting is perfect and the characters are excellent. Thanks for the presentation, I saw a good story.

A masterpiece, a real masterpiece, nothing like Tomato. Really, after reading Tomato for so long, I have rarely seen such a high-quality work. Let me briefly talk about my feelings. First of all, the completeness of the article is very high. Basically, there are not many unreasonable or inexplicable plot advancements, and the portrayal of the characters is also relatively prominent. , To be honest, it is not easy to portray the emotional line like this in a male video article. I personally like the emotional line in this article very much. This article is not a pure and refreshing article. It is pushed up without any brains. It feels more like relying on the brain. There is another point worthy of praise. The author has really filled it in, unlike someone who has cheated. Some authors dig it up or bury it, and the ending is generally quite reasonable. I read it straight through in one go. Some of the logic is quite confusing. I may consider reading it a second time in the future and try to figure it out. If you like to read Shuangwen Wudiliu carefully, there may be a little bit that does not meet your expectations. I will give this book a negative review when the time comes. Necessary 🤭 The possible problem is that on the one hand, the number of words in a single chapter is relatively large, which makes it seem a bit difficult. The author could consider setting the number of words in a single chapter to be a little smaller. The author himself also said that the description may not be as good as the plot design, but I personally think that the plot is more important than those boring and empty embellishments. Keep up the good work, author. It's a pity that such an excellent author has been buried. (Ps: After reading the final chapter, I have to say that I actually added this book before it was finished. It is undeniable that I was really reading it at the time. The ratings and number of readers at that time were really not good, so I really didn't like this book at that time. I am very sorry 😢 😢 😢)

Finished reading~! It's indeed a huge worldview I agree with the author's view that the world we live in is both regular and full of contingency. Goodbye with Lisa, that place is great The end! More knife! 🥺 Looking forward to the author's next work about the hymn of the lying man

1. The world view is huge and comfortable to watch, so you can continue watching it. 2. The plot concept is OK, and the character creation is OK, but the length is too short, resulting in most of the characters still not being as three-dimensional. 3. The heroine can be portrayed well. I came from the single heroine division. After watching it, I still have more to say. That's all I can think of for the moment. The novel is really good. People who click in don't care about the rating. You can go and read it. If it really doesn't suit you, don't criticize me.

Summary: 80% good-looking, 90% recommended The idea is good, but the writing is not. Reversals, routines, and foreshadowings are all well written, especially the time aspect, which leaves several simple and effective foreshadowings. It is creative and thoughtful, the overall rhythm is moderate, and there is no unfinished story. The only drawback is that the author's literary strength is somewhat insufficient. For example, there are some low-level writing techniques such as "the reason is...". Overall, a rare high-quality fantasy + weak science fiction short and medium story

It is indeed science fiction covered in fantasy. The entry points and viewpoints are great, and the whole plot forms a closed loop, but it's a bit mind-numbing. There is a section in the middle that is not very watchable, but as it gets closer to the end, it becomes more and more addictive. The ability to fill in the gaps can be said to be full marks. If you want to dig deeper for yourself, don't read the comments, because sometimes there will be spoilers, but there are many interesting places that you can think up on your own. The disadvantage may be that the description of fighting and love is not very good. Personal rating 9.0. It is a good book that is hidden by its name.

First of all, let me state that the following evaluation is completely true and comes from the heart, and is not a positive review by humans and machines. In my opinion, the plot of this book is very logical, because I am the kind of person who, even if the plot of the novel is exciting and enjoyable, can't read it if there are loopholes in the logic or the writing is a little bit idiotic. I can't read many high-scoring articles on Tomato, but this is obviously not the case with this book. The various reversals and foreshadowings designed by the author are also very pleasing. I have read a lot of online articles, but I haven't found a meal replacement yet. The author's creativity is still very novel even today, a few years later. I suspect that the book itself may be slow to gain popularity, so this book is not very popular, so few people learn from it hhhhh. Moreover, Western Fantasy also has a dissuasive effect to a certain extent, but I hope that readers who read this review will not give up reading this book because the name is difficult to remember and unfamiliar. This book is really wonderful.

The best novel I have read this year, with a huge amount of plot. It's not long enough yet. If all the pitfalls are filled in later and the plot line doesn't jump out, it's hard to believe that this book won't be popular. If we don't stop updating, we can only say that Tomato has been occupied by brainless articles. It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first book (it can't be Trumpet, right? In terms of the plot, it is basically intertwined. No event is irrelevant. The ending of the first volume is quite perfect. I look forward to the following chapters.