Nightmare Cross

I only use four words to describe it, wonderful. This book is one of the best in my 3000 hours of online reading. From the countless foreshadowings in the early stage to the later stages, it almost forms a perfect logical closed loop, as well as the collision of causality, time ethics, technology and magic, and countless reversals that make my scalp numb again and again. It can really be regarded as a Tomato T0 level.

Very shocking... So far, it can be said that it is the only Western fantasy novel that I can read and be addicted to. Before this, I never thought that I would like a Western fantasy so much. All the foreshadowing can be recycled, some places that I think are unreasonable can be filled in later, and the plot and settings are like a fairy... I think this combination of science fiction and Western District is simply too charming. There is also a rare three-dimensional view of the Internet, and the male and female protagonists have enough roles, the interactions are very vivid, and the IQs of the male and female protagonists and the villains will not drop... Is this an online article that I deserve to read? No more talking, come on, author!

Perfect setting and structure, but I want to say that a sad and perfect ending might be better. You are too gentle, author. The author is a bit lacking. Maybe you should have more expressions, more exaggerated but logical expressions, maybe make this character more vivid? The last few dialogues seem to be just describing the setting. Although the setting is amazing, after talking about the skills, it is best to add a description of the environment. If it is meaningful, it will probably leave the reader more interested. Overall, the setting is perfect and the characters are excellent. Thanks for the presentation, I saw a good story.

A masterpiece, a real masterpiece, nothing like Tomato. Really, after reading Tomato for so long, I have rarely seen such a high-quality work. Let me briefly talk about my feelings. First of all, the completeness of the article is very high. Basically, there are not many unreasonable or inexplicable plot advancements, and the portrayal of the characters is also relatively prominent. , To be honest, it is not easy to portray the emotional line like this in a male video article. I personally like the emotional line in this article very much. This article is not a pure and refreshing article. It is pushed up without any brains. It feels more like relying on the brain. There is another point worthy of praise. The author has really filled it in, unlike someone who has cheated. Some authors dig it up or bury it, and the ending is generally quite reasonable. I read it straight through in one go. Some of the logic is quite confusing. I may consider reading it a second time in the future and try to figure it out. If you like to read Shuangwen Wudiliu carefully, there may be a little bit that does not meet your expectations. I will give this book a negative review when the time comes. Necessary [laughing] The possible problem is that on the one hand, the number of words in a single chapter is relatively large, which makes it seem a bit difficult. The author could consider setting the number of words in a single chapter to be a little smaller. The author himself also said that the description may not be as good as the plot design, but I personally think that the plot is more important than those boring and empty embellishments. Keep up the good work, author. It's a pity that such an excellent author has been buried. (Ps: After reading the final chapter, I have to say that I actually added this book before it was finished. It is undeniable that I was really reading it at the time. The ratings and number of readers at that time were really not good, so I really didn't like this book at that time. I am very sorry [crying] [crying] [crying])

Finished reading~! It's indeed a huge worldview I agree with the author's view that the world we live in is both regular and full of contingency. Goodbye with Lisa, that place is great The end! More knife! [Almost crying] Looking forward to the author's next work about the hymn of the lying man

1. The world view is huge and comfortable to watch, so you can continue watching it. 2. The plot concept is OK, and the character creation is OK, but the length is too short, resulting in most of the characters still not being as three-dimensional. 3. The heroine can be portrayed well. I came from the single heroine division. After watching it, I still have more to say. That's all I can think of for the moment. The novel is really good. People who click in don't care about the rating. You can go and read it. If it really doesn't suit you, don't criticize me.

Summary: 80% good-looking, 90% recommended The idea is good, but the writing is not. Reversals, routines, and foreshadowings are all well written, especially the time aspect, which leaves several simple and effective foreshadowings. It is creative and thoughtful, the overall rhythm is moderate, and there is no unfinished story. The only drawback is that the author's literary strength is somewhat insufficient. For example, there are some low-level writing techniques such as "the reason is...". Overall, a rare high-quality fantasy + weak science fiction short and medium story

It is indeed science fiction covered in fantasy. The entry points and viewpoints are great, and the whole plot forms a closed loop, but it's a bit mind-numbing. There is a section in the middle that is not very watchable, but as it gets closer to the end, it becomes more and more addictive. The ability to fill in the gaps can be said to be full marks. If you want to dig deeper for yourself, don't read the comments, because sometimes there will be spoilers, but there are many interesting places that you can think up on your own. The disadvantage may be that the description of fighting and love is not very good. Personal rating 9.0. It is a good book that is hidden by its name.

First of all, let me state that the following evaluation is completely true and comes from the heart, and is not a positive review by humans and machines. In my opinion, the plot of this book is very logical, because I am the kind of person who, even if the plot of the novel is exciting and enjoyable, can't read it if there are loopholes in the logic or the writing is a little bit idiotic. I can't read many high-scoring articles on Tomato, but this is obviously not the case with this book. The various reversals and foreshadowings designed by the author are also very pleasing. I have read a lot of online articles, but I haven't found a meal replacement yet. The author's creativity is still very novel even today, a few years later. I suspect that the book itself may be slow to gain popularity, so this book is not very popular, so few people learn from it hhhhh. Moreover, Western Fantasy also has a dissuasive effect to a certain extent, but I hope that readers who read this review will not give up reading this book because the name is difficult to remember and unfamiliar. This book is really wonderful.

The best novel I have read this year, with a huge amount of plot. It's not long enough yet. If all the pitfalls are filled in later and the plot line doesn't jump out, it's hard to believe that this book won't be popular. If we don't stop updating, we can only say that Tomato has been occupied by brainless articles. It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first book (it can't be Trumpet, right? In terms of the plot, it is basically intertwined. No event is irrelevant. The ending of the first volume is quite perfect. I look forward to the following chapters.

I have finished reading it. I have not read many novels. My Chinese is not good. There may be some inaccuracies below, so I will just give a brief evaluation. How can I put it? The early story is very exciting, and the middle part is also good. The theory of each short story in the later period is a bit uncomfortable to read. After all, my Chinese is not good. The general plot is a showdown between geniuses. This is the most exciting game I have ever seen. Every step has its own meaning. Watching this huge gamble with the gods made me excited. The characters are also perfectly portrayed. I can feel that he is a flesh-and-blood existence. However, I no longer have this feeling in the later stages. It makes me feel a little uncomfortable after watching it. I mean it's not finished. When I was reading it, I couldn't read it word by word, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. The plot is still great, at least all the pitfalls are rounded up, and the single heroine is unbeatable. Well, my Chinese is not good anyway, and I can't write anything good. The general evaluation is that it is very worth reading. There will be a different world waiting for you. New book friends, bravely rush forward.

I just read Chapter 4. Let me not talk about the plot setting. As for the description of the protagonist, it is really very real. I was suspicious of the so-called goddess at first glance, but I easily believed it for various reasons. It is very consistent with the attitude of a normal person towards a person with good looks, not to mention that the person has given a lot of benefits and is still being punished, which makes people pity or pity.

Don't be fooled by the title. This book is a science fiction text with a fantasy color. The echo of its whimsical ideas and foreshadowing details is perfect, and it can almost achieve perfect logic and self-consistency. It shows that the author has a strong foundation. It is a pity that the traffic of this book is so bleak. Tomato has no shortage of trolls to brush up the traffic. After reading a certain work for a few hours, I can definitely say that it is a divine book. But in my heart, such a transcendent yet reasonable story is really a masterpiece. Please be sure to read this book carefully.

What a great book. I forget where I found this book. But if you don't like secondary reading or casual reading, speed reading is a very good and no-brainer approach. Especially since this book is already finished, so there is no need to wait. And many plots can be recalled quickly through quick reading. Otherwise, it would be like reading it after too long and then realizing that you have forgotten everything, because this book is very detailed. The previous small details will be forgotten if you read them again after a while. Anyway, I read a little from last night, and then from 10 to 1 this morning. I finished the quick brushing, and I can only say that the writing is really good. It's not like they say that the extra chapter is too logical. After all, this is what is needed for a perfect ending. [Thinking] [Thinking] It's okay, I can bear it.

This is what I said to my friends after reading this: I saw a novel on Tomato, and I think it can't be limited to online novels at all. It's orthodox science fiction After reading a lot of online articles, there are really very few novels in which everything can be justified, all the foreshadowing can be taken back, and all the logical systems are complete. Thanks to myself for opening this novel by chance, thanks to the author, and thanks to the readers who supported the author in completing the novel🥰

Although it is relatively short, it tells a complete story and beautifully depicts the protagonist and his growth. All the foreshadowing in this book is also recycled, and when I see the recycling, I can't help but marvel at the beauty of the author's writing. The content of this work is rather convoluted, but it is very interesting to think about while reading it. I will read some parts over and over again several times, and finally stayed up late for several days to finish reading it. I really think it is a wonderful work. Of course, many people may not be able to read it. The suggestion here is not to force yourself to read it, but to read it all at once when you are interested, so that you will have a better reading experience.

Rather than saying that this is a novel with a predetermined happy ending, this should be a masterpiece of thinking, with logic running through magic, no complicated narratives, and a capable main line, but you can only remember the plot of the main line, and understand it repeatedly after reading it over and over again. Although every character in it seems to have a God's perspective and high IQ, the passage of time is deducing the main line through the process of reasoning. The intellectual romance makes the emotions of this article not seem cliché. The speculations about the creator and the choice of race make this book not too monotonous and have no clear main line. There is no thin structure that makes reading a piece of cake, and there is no in-depth exploration. The contradictions are continuous, but not abrupt. Its regular extension makes it possible to read in depth. This is a book not suitable for tomatoes, but a book suitable for thinkers. This is a book that breaks away from the stereotype of cool articles. It is the first book I have reviewed in a long way.

It's good-looking, the plots are intertwined, and the author is very dedicated to filling in all the pitfalls. The ending of the main text makes people's hearts tremble and I want to send the razor blade immediately, but the extra ending is very comfortable. I took back the razor blade sent to the author. I have hardly written a book review in the past 20 years, and the two articles that the author has completed are written as he pleases. After reading this, I hope that such a high-quality book and such a connotative author will not be buried. I hope that more readers will be patient enough to read it. However, in my opinion, you will be attracted unconsciously when reading the author's book. It is full of content and ideas. Although it has the halo of the protagonist, it is not a mindless novel and it is worth reading.

It is extremely excellent. The author's logical argumentation method is very exquisite, and the use of foreshadowing is at its peak. The author may be somewhat lacking in professional knowledge, but it does not affect the author's expression of his thoughts (some readers may think that some parts are still difficult to understand, but the cause and effect are indeed clear and difficult to demonstrate) (the author is not satisfied with the two reversals of the ending, but I think it has reached a certain level. At a high level, the reason why readers don't realize it depends on the author's own explanation. The main reason is that the length of the article is short, so the foreshadowing cannot appear as many times as clues, and the number of readers is small. It is normal for no one to notice or the readers who noticed did not express it. PS: Anyway, I did not do this before the author's explanation. It is true that there are not enough important foreshadowing points and it is too difficult)

Invincible is really good-looking. It is one of the few Tomato books that can integrate the plot and the emotions of the characters. The characters are not "forced" to have certain emotions in order to advance the plot. At worst, it is just a reasonable coincidence. I feel very happy after reading it at least once. Although the true ending is very good and the true ending achieves a logical closed loop, the false ending in the front is actually very interesting, because even if there is no true ending, many details of the false ending are still interesting. It wants to make you feel that it is true, and even more lament Yu Chen's fate as the Lord of Time. The reversal in the final true ending is completely different from the false ending, but it can also correspond to the details. The author's ability to set up foreshadowing and recycling is really good, and when recycling, there will always be new foreshadowings that are linked together, but the recycling plot is independent and completely reasonable, which can only be said to be so cool!

It's a masterpiece, a science fiction novel with a Western fantasy cover. The relationship between the two worlds in the first part is actually a trivial matter, but it suddenly becomes more interesting in the second part. The countless foreshadowings laid in the previous part are also filled in. The author's logic is really strong, and the ending is also a good one. I was initially shocked by the words about meeting the heroine's parents, but I didn't expect that it would come true in the end. It's a pity that the subject matter is too niche and the name is not attractive, which leads to poor results. Hey, it is really a good book.

(Read the long review) A magnificent fantasy science fiction novel. The plot is strongly recommended [like] This is a very cerebral story. There are a lot of foreshadowings, all of them are taken care of, and each one made me sigh. Time and space, magic and technology, fate and memory are connected and woven by the author in such a clever way, turning into a wonderful chapter. The IQs of the male and female protagonists in the full text are online, and the foreshadowing and reversal make the story's direction ups and downs. Although the number of words seems to be small, there are many key points, and it is no easier to read than a million-word novel. The knife, how should I put it, is in a superposition state. It can be counted as present or not. It mainly depends on whether you can figure it out. If you don't understand it, the author also made it come true in the last extra chapter, establishing a happy and true ending. The shortcomings are that there are few characterizations of each character, which is not considered excellent, but you can also get a glimpse of each character's personality; there are few descriptions of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, which are only gradually improved as the plot progresses; the narrative is too strong and the visual sense is insufficient. But this is also a new attempt to temporarily break away from the cool text. Only by reading continuously, thinking carefully and savoring can the unique charm of this book be reflected. Additional keywords: The world view is very large, and it gradually opens up; and the logic is self-consistent, and the author's imagination is really big.

A very good book. Whether it is the setting, world view or writing style, they are all quite complete and mature. The story seems to be about fatalism, and what everyone is destined to do is inevitable. And all gifts eventually have a price - just as time travel is an out-and-out trap, entangled with the fate of those involved. However, the trajectory of destiny is shaped by people themselves, and people's behavior is driven by the times and desires. When the perspective of looking at the world is measured by time and space, one has to feel one's own insignificance. The true happy ending seems a bit unreal, like a fairy tale described by tired adults to children. But that's pretty good too. After all, the birth of civilization itself is a fairy tale miracle.

It's good, it's good. When I watched it, I had the same feeling of fumbling through the past as I watched the first part of Heir to the Star. But for me personally, the long part where the male protagonist and the female protagonist flirted and sprinkled sugar in the later period made me very uncomfortable and I couldn't stand it, because I prefer science fiction novels. In fact, science fiction novels generally contain very few emotional scenes. To me, this book is a science fiction suspense genre, so I think it is perfectly fine to put that section in a female channel. There is also a feeling that the reasoning is too simple, especially the small puzzles. For example, the chapter where the war breaks out between the two countries and the protagonist stops the war is solved too quickly. It is like the feeling of calculating the process from the results. It may also be the description of the text. I guessed without writing. I speculated that these relatively vague words gave people the feeling as if they already knew the correct answer before rereading it. I think there is no problem with the big background puzzles. There are a lot of foreshadowings that can be echoed.

Except for the shortcomings of the writing, the content and ideas are very good. Because the author has no literature, this novel is not long, the narrative is clear, and there is no unfinished story. If you don't like reading novice and systematic texts, this novel is worth reading.

After reading the book on and off for several months, I finally finished it. I can confidently say that it is the best book I have ever read on Tomato. At first I watched it because it was my favorite western fantasy/single girl theme, but as I looked at it I realized it was a science fiction theme disguised as a western fantasy. Well, although I have never been a big fan of science fiction works, this book is an exception. The script and narrative are genius, and there are frequent flashbacks and golden sentences. The heroine is very, very well portrayed, and the impression of the character is almost not particularly flat. The only thing that can be improved may be that the emotional rendering in some places is not very good? For example, the lack of ignition and tears? Or maybe the author didn't want to write about it at all, it's just my personal thoughts haha. It can be seen that the writing style is still a little green, but it is definitely worthy of more readers. Friends who read this review can rest assured to read on. There is no foreshadowing in the whole process and all the words are recycled.

It felt very fresh at the beginning, but as I read on, it became more and more profound, and I always felt that there was nothing. But when I looked back at the later chapters, I thought, it turns out that this plot has such foreshadowing. You should read this novel slowly. I really think it is worth reading. However, if you want to think of it as a novel, it will definitely not work. However, it has a beginning and an end, and the beginning is also the tail, and the tail can also be the beginning. Although the reading process is not easy, and sometimes I read a chapter over several days, but after reading it, I found that the plot looped back and forth, and the more I thought about it, the more interesting it became.

The advantage of this book is that it has a good setting and strict logic. It is a rare, reasonable and good online text with a setting. Strictly speaking, it meets Tomato's five-star standard. Disadvantages: Too much emphasis on logical self-consistency, and likes to complicate seemingly simple things (perhaps because the author has a philosopher's style). The author organically combines magic and technology, and makes multiple levels of setting nesting. I want to criticize here. For me, only the early steps to reveal the setting are still somewhat interesting to me. Since rescuing Tiya, the author has gone further and further on the road of (in my opinion) self-pleasure. Maybe it's personal interest, and I'm not very interested in the so-called time travel, closed logic loops and other aspects that the author is proud of, but the author has put a lot of thought into it. Generally speaking, it seems like two novels before and after rescuing Tia. I prefer the first half.

To be honest, there are so many things I want to praise, and I don't know what to say at the moment. Good evaluation from two aspects 1. The logic is strict, the plot is connected one by one, and the author digs holes and buries them. After reading it, I found no missing holes; 2. The plot is compact, there is no problem with the word count, and it is all about practical information (and on this basis, it gives you the feeling of driving at 2x speed). I think these two are the basic elements that a book should have (or should be said to be the elements that a good book has, because just like an actor, memorizing lines is a good quality), and this book has them completely. In addition, what is commendable is the excellence of this book and the author's excellent literary quality. At first I thought it was a magic novel, but then it turned into a suspense novel for no apparent reason. At the end of my brainstorming, I suddenly realized that it was actually a science fiction novel. I could only say, the author is awesome. This is the first feeling after reading the book. If I compare it with the good books I have read, this book has an excellent plot like "The End of Ten Days", independent thinking and unique insights into science like "The Three-Body Problem", and a truly exciting competition between the characters like "The Lord of Mysteries". Everyone is the protagonist, moving forward for their own ideals, and the story is told from the perspective of one character. There are many excellent places, so let's summarize them for now. There are also shortcomings, but my description is not accurate. I will just say one thing that I felt uncomfortable with when reading, and that is the setting problem. There are some anti-cognitive and unacceptable aspects in the basic settings, and these settings appear at the beginning of the book. These two points will directly dissuade a large number of people. Because of a simple logic of thinking, if what he said is different from what I know, then there is a high probability that there is something wrong with what he said. This is very similar to the development of science, but the development of science is related to readers' lives, and will encourage readers to accept scientific theories after they are perfected. Novels do not have this kind of internal motivation. When readers see something counter-intuitive and there is no complete theory to explain it as soon as possible, everyone will come to the conclusion that this book is so bad that it cannot even tell the basic story. The setting issues that I feel more intuitively are as follows: For example, people in the earth realm can only absorb magic power from space, and people from the fire realm can only absorb magic power from time, which is still acceptable. But magic can only be taught to others through divine communication. A magician cannot learn any knowledge about magic through the magic book recorded by another magician. It is somewhat counter-intuitive that there is no magic lingua franca under the long development of magic civilization. To a certain extent, the development of civilization depends on the accumulation of experience, and if the experience cannot be reproduced, then the experience is worthless, let alone continued in-depth research, then people will not know how to develop for the better, and then the civilization will be completely disordered and difficult to develop. Because most social groups tend to stabilize and maintain stability, disorder is the biggest challenge to stability.

It's extremely beautiful, with plot twists and the like. There are some details that are not very substantial, the plot is very real, but the description of the environment is still not realistic enough. However, each character has his own personality, which is very real. The plot is relatively smooth and coherent, not superficial at all. Author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง. But it seems to be over.