Also known as The Death Note vs. Naruto System Takes Me to Another World to Become a Mastermind, With a System, I Decide to Make This Twisted World Feel Pain, and Changing the World Starts with Living Like Aizen
[Mastermind] + [Ensemble Cast]
This is a bleak and twisted world, overrun by darkness and corruption.
As an upstanding young man of the new age, I feel this world needs to experience a little pain.
I won't take off these glasses until this world has been completely changed, because I can no longer bear to look at it!
Become a god, hide behind the scenes, and sweep the land with a spiritual qi revival, letting the world be broken before it can be remade.
What are the legendary Twelve Golden Palaces, the god-slaying organization that has nursed a blood feud in the shadows for ten thousand years, the ancient ruins in search of a spiritual qi revival, and the love and hatred behind humanity's salvation all about? What is the truth of this world?
(The first few chapters are transitional.)
I'll give it three stars initially. She portrays everyone as having a pure, innocent soul, completely untouched by human experience. Are you sure such people can exist in the world you're depicting? And what's the point of this little girl? Is she just there to fill space when you're out of things to write?
After reading the first three chapters, I had two questions: Why go to school? Why work? I glanced at the table of contents, and wow, the formula is so familiar! I know exactly how it'll go from here on out.
Cao Shaoqin: I don't eat beef. Main character: You glanced at me.
I can't say for sure. The protagonist might find a plausible reason for himself, and then commit murder.
A good book Why are the updates so slow? Even one post a day would be fine, why? You can't even do that? You haven't updated at all. Originally, this work, if handled well, had a great plot and strong emotions, and it would have been a hit. But the plot has some problems; it feels disjointed and incomplete.
There was an awkwardness I couldn't quite put my finger on; there was a slightly strange feeling during the transition.
Is it really possible to break it down into smaller, scattered pieces?