One Supermarket to Conquer the World

I Found a Treasure [Like] Let me talk about the shortcomings first. The title of the book is useless, and the introduction feels like a funny and deceptive version. The advantage is that the characters have distinct characteristics, and even the characters who only get a box lunch after a few chapters are written with flesh and blood. This alone is better than at least 🍅85% of the authors; and the male protagonist is not invincible, but gradually grows through experience after experience. If you throw away the concept of system and time travel, this can also have a place in normal literature.

The writing is pretty good. Currently, the Gold Finger opening is pretty good, not too big, but relatively not weak and quite appropriate. And the war writing is also very good, with flesh and blood. When you fight aliens, it is not just a one-sided massacre. It is not as exaggerated as other novels. The protagonist is killed like a dog before he comes. When the protagonist comes, he massacres others one-sidedly. The writing is more realistic.

For my own book, I will give you a good review first, but not too much. I hope everyone will like this passionate story on the frontier. The following stories will be even more passionate. I hope to get your support.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, it's time to immerse yourself in history + passion + farming for hegemony. It's a cool, semi-white novel with a good atmosphere, but the writing style and grasp of the plot are a bit lacking. Overall it's passable, I still support the new book and look forward to growing.

It should be a cool novel for beginners. This idea is actually quite classic and has some cool points. But the author's handling is not very good, and the writing is smooth, but not enough. I wanted to write about a passionate country, but the details were not heroic enough, and I felt that I lacked some relevant knowledge. It just gives me a superficial feeling. When it's sensational, it's a little awkward and a little silly. In short, the advantage is that the plot is relatively smooth and it is relatively passionate. Well, for me, it is three and a half to four and a half stars.

In the early stage, you can directly mobilize all the people as soldiers, and then start ideological education, who is no longer hungry, who is giving you enough food, etc. Anyway, you can say that you are sent by the gods to save the world, that's fine.

It's really good. The writing is getting better and better, and the characters are well-drawn. It makes people feel like they are in this world. The story is wonderful and worth reading.

It's quite exciting and shouldn't be rated so low. A passionate history of the rise of an empire. Every hero, villain, and gangster in it has its own unique characteristics. It makes people watch it again and again and put it down.

Not bad. I just hope that after the protagonist's rebellion is successful, he can learn from Huang Chao and destroy all the big families in Daxia. It would be better to directly support the big families that are loyal to the protagonist. Anyway, the protagonist doesn't need those corrupt old big families because of the system. It's not safe to keep them.

It's very good, and it's motivational to keep reading. Good luck to the author!