Quick Transmigration: Pretty Darling, Don’t Even Think of Escaping

The writing is quite good, but it still feels a bit sadistic, and I really don't understand the relationship between attacking and receiving in the early stage, so the early stage of loving a person who is in love is really confusing. The part where Gong was drugged really made Gao Jiedang a little uncomfortable. If the O didn't say anything, would Gong have kissed her, or would she have gone too far and slept with someone else directly? This part can be changed [Sending my heart] In short, big cheers to the author, this book is still good! [Like][Please update]

It's very interesting. Please keep updating. The first world is really touching. Who knows, I like to attack the crazy behavior of sending harassing messages to Shou (forget about real life). The attack is Su Gong, but it's not too obtrusive at all. He won't use Shou as a tool to set off Su. The main theme is still Shou's heartthrob. He really loves his beautiful wife. How should I put it? In the article written by the heartthrob, chastity must be the best dowry for a man (Gong). Have you received it [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

If you have any positive suggestions and corrections, you can post them on this floor. I will read all the comments as long as I have time, and I will also modify or respond to some controversial issues. However, I am deeply sorry for some of the structural flaws. Thousands of people have different opinions. It is my first time to write an article and I may not be able to cater to everyone's taste, but it is still very heart-warming to see good comments. Thank you again for your great tolerance! ! ! ! ૧(●´৺`●)૭૧(●´৺`●)૭

It's not so much a quick travel story as it is a book composed of several stories. It is different from traditional fast-traveling stories. I was confused when I first read it, but if I take it as a book by itself, it is like several books put together into one. I liked the first story at the beginning, but I didn't like the latter part. I thought it was a sweet story, but it's not very sweet in fact. It just deals with some problems in reality and some problems in abo. They're all pretty cruel. However, various problems were overcome later, and the protagonist Gong also had his pancreatic glands removed. They became betas and ended up happily together, but I didn't think it was sweet. In fact, the process in the middle was quite sad, so I only read the first story of this book, and I read it as a book, not a time travel.

In fact, it can be written as a collection of stories instead of quick travel. Quick travel is actually quite cumbersome. Generally speaking, this book is well written. The character description of the supporting characters is a little on the mediocre side. The logic is A-, the plot is A-, and the characterization is A- [Don't take it for granted that I'm a low-income person. If you have the ability to get all A's in the exam, it's an eye-opener for me (●'◡'●)]

Why is this book rated so low? ? Obviously so good-looking? ! Those who have not discovered this treasure must be in trouble (screaming) (twisting) (creeping darkly) (squirming darkly) (rolling) (trembling violently) (convulsing) (snarling) (squirming) (gloomy growl) (crawling) (split) (walking ashore) (twisting) (walking twisted) (attacks regardless of target) (walking around) (trips) (crawling darkly) (meaningless) Crying) (Sitting in the corner) (Ghostly howling) (Crawling forward at top speed) (Dazzling with giant pirouettes) (Flip handstand) (Attack everyone) (Crawling with enthusiasm) (Speeding) (Warning cry) (Indiscriminate foot brake) (Flying on the ceiling) (Flung into other people's faces) (Face-to-face killing) (Weird laughter) (Gnaw a few mouthfuls of hair) (Backflip away) (Looking for the next target)

It's so beautiful. The first world made me cry. The stories in the subsequent worlds are also very interesting. I will read it again. Damn girl, it's so well written. I'll continue to write the next one. Come on, sisters, you must read this book. It's really good! ! ! ! ! ! !

I like it. It is a rare novel that I have finished reading. It is different from the traditional fast-traveling host. The traditional fast-traveling host has a strong purpose and cannot fit into every world. But this novel is different. It feels like a small story, which is very novel. In short, I like it😍😍😍😍😍😍Thank you so much to the author! It's a pity that the author only has this one work. I quite like the author's writing style. I hope the author can publish more works in the future, and don't care too much about other people's opinions. After all, it's hard to agree with everyone. Let me reiterate, I really like it, keep up the good work! ╭(╯ε╰)╮

I pride myself on not being suitable for reading small world books that are too long, but this one is really good. Even though some people think that A and O are the destination, I believe that we will break this barrier. Fortunately, I have someone who can save my whole world again. "It's just a gland removed." "Does it hurt?" "It doesn't hurt" He Zhichuan & Wenhuai yyds

It's a very novel style. It's different from most of the two-male protagonists I've seen before, but I think the author's writing style is very good. The article is very readable and close to reality. I like it very much [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]