Astral Express: But the Heroes and Herrschers Are All Here

It's really well written, the characters are well maintained, and the plot of the story is very reasonable. It's all a dream come true [laughs]. However, please note that the main plot is mainly the protagonist's route and the layout of the star core hunters. Don't write too biasedly. Five-star praise! I said that there are some places where the reading is not smooth. It always feels unreasonable and the plot is missing. It turns out that you are digging a hole but not filling it [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

Oh, my friend, hurry up and update. I can't wait to see what's next. If you don't update yet, you will bear my wrath. I will kick your ass hard with my size 42 feet.

This book is really well written, which is an understandable fact. Some of the author's ideas are really awesome. If it could be written all the time, it would definitely be a masterpiece. It's a pity that there are a group of unknown creatures who don't understand the plot and still think they are right. I hope the author will continue to work hard to reach the altar as soon as possible. Finally, I hope this trip will reach the stars

The author may not have a particularly in-depth understanding of the background story, but his writing style is very good. Personally, I don't think it deserves this score.

Hey, I suddenly thought of something. The real Ellie died 50,000 years ago. It was the memory in Paradise that remembered Mei, but the memory also disappeared when the erosion was suppressed. After resurrection, Ellie remembered Mei. In other words, the real Ellie synchronized the memory of Paradise? [Thinking][thinking] And the twisted Ellie Kitchen - Erosion

This book is okay, the subject matter is relatively new, and the author has done a good job in controlling the characters' personalities. The shortcomings are that the settings of Beng San and Beng Tie are a bit biased. If you only play Beng San or Beng Tie, you will inevitably feel a little uncomfortable when reading some details of this book. It depends on how the author changes it later. Secondly, the author is great, you have too many typos, remember to correct them. Finally, come on, I am optimistic about you.

The quality of the Star Iron fanfiction I have read is relatively high, and the character of Kevin was not written down (Kevin's character is difficult to write). The children like it very much.

It's very well written, I hope it doesn't stop. [Praise]

Seeing that you are quite proud of your creativity, I will give you one of my own. However, I know that my writing skills are not good, so I have never started writing. If you are interested, you can write about it. Most of those who play Xingtie have played Genshin Impact. Have you ever thought that Hu Tao's temperament would be quite strange in a post-apocalyptic story? Total weight of life and death, but are zombies considered life and dead bodies? In this case, would Hutao want to bury all the zombies in the world? If Hutao herself becomes a zombie, will she commit suicide directly or bury all the zombies before committing suicide? If Hutao saw someone experimenting with zombies, would it be blasphemy against zombies in her eyes?

It looks good and suits my taste. I found the character descriptions to be very delicate, and the Belloberg episode had a cold and cruel feel to it. That was the disaster, not the game's play-acting. I'm really upset about Qianlu and Xiaoxiu in the back, I hope there won't be any knives.