A Cannon-Fodder in the Cultivation World Goes Mad and Rewrites the Plot

First book review. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (excited)

@Hanjiansu Author I am here again [sending my heart] Good-looking good-looking friends The author's writing about cultivating immortality is very smooth. I felt as smooth as eating Dove while reading it. I witnessed part of Su Mian's story, and even got a glimpse of the overflowing youthful spirit. I think that when people live in the world, there are ordinary people, good people and powerful people, diversity is immortal, and the gears of their destiny in another world must keep turning. This book may be suitable for the following book titles # Female channel to cultivate immortality + have cp #xiuxianhuangwen #groupportraits #The male and female protagonists pull together but are not tired of it #OE Okay, let's spread the praise🌸🌸🌸

I hope the male protagonist is Senior Brother Yu, hahaha

It's okay, okay, this is a novel based on lightheartedness and comedy, and the heroine is an occasional "smart person" that I love who can turn things around and stand up. There is almost no CP direction, but the object of ambiguity and development as a Taoist partner is Ye Feilan (Lord Demon Lord) There are some plot twists, but there is nothing surprising about the plot. In my memory of watching it intermittently, there seems to be no big holes left unfilled. But looking at it this way, the plot seems a bit bland. Although I have been fighting against the original heroine, I wrote other things in the middle. Although it seems to me that the system and "My Way of Heaven" explain the ins and outs of the world line, why do I feel so unhappy! ! ! The male and female protagonists get 2 points of sweets🍬, they are hidden pets.

It's good to watch, but it's just not enough. Is there any extra episode? [Crying] The heroine seems to be afraid of death, greedy for money and lustful, but in the face of righteousness, she can live and die in private affairs. She is greedy for money but does not kill or rob, and is lustful but has no intention of forcing others. She is just appreciative. She seems to know nothing, but in fact she is very smart and has a high level of understanding. [Learned] Ye Feilan seems to be a heinous villain, but in fact he has clear grievances and a miserable childhood, but he can still maintain his sanity. He is not like the one who destroys the whole world at every turn, and can coexist peacefully with the twelve continents in the end. Unlike some people who either die or I die, one of you and I must die. Although the ending leaves a lot of room for readers' imagination, I don't like to use my brain, so the author, is there any extra story [crying] [please update] Also, the story line is the main focus, and the group portraits

It's good-looking, the heroine's design is so funny, I hope the male protagonist is oriental, the big dog character is really hard to refuse [Adoration][Adoration]

The writing is good and the language is light and humorous. The heroine's character is also quite likable, and the part where the system and world consciousness are fighting is quite novel. Overall, it's not bad and worth watching. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

It's good to read, and the whole story is very comfortable to read. The female protagonist is a fun person, the male protagonist's character is good, the senior brother, Dongfang, Laolong and the system are also good! Great and readable! Although the male and female protagonists didn't say it clearly in the end, I just assumed they were a couple! We get along quite harmoniously! Su Mian & Ye Feilan!

The plot is not boring. There is no patriarchy in the world of immortality, and there is no sanctimonious way to kidnap the protagonist. Their three views are also very upright. Compared with several literary and immortal worlds I have seen before, where women are superior to men, this is much more orthodox. In the plot, the female character dotes on the male character. The female protagonist has a lovable personality and is humorous. She makes progress when she needs to and is idle when she is in trouble. Yun Yehe, the male protagonist is a villain but very well-behaved. She has her own rules and is very pampering! It's just that the article is a bit short. It's so fun to pass the time.

It's good to watch. The male protagonist appears late, and then the relationship line only has a little bit of clues in the finale [facepalm], but the overall story is very good. There is no love, but a wave of sincere friendship is also very good.