[No cp] + [No time traveler] + [Light OOC] + [No system] + [Easy]
As you can see, I am a magician, and next to me is my sister, who is also my magic assistant.
"Hey, you ordered the wrong wine. I ordered apple wine."
"You're drunk. You just said you wanted the best wine."
"Hey, don't do this, will I remember it wrong?"
The magician put his hand in the air and snapped his fingers. After the sound, he said, "Look again, what's in the cup?"
"Huh? Oh, yes, that's it." He picked up the cider.
"The fragrance of apples..." He was about to drink the glass of wine, but he saw that the cider suddenly turned into apples.
"Strange? What I just took was..."
The magician played with the cards in his hand, "In the eyes of many people, magic is a miracle."
As magicians, we prefer to hear: "Great miracles, just like magic."
(Most of the early part of this article is the main plot. If you have read the main plot, you can skip it appropriately after chapters 1-9. The current plot is the early plot, and you can wait for more than ten days before returning.)
(In addition, Linny's character fluctuates greatly, and the magician is a semi-neutral mission. The new eighth seat is a villain. He will appear after the main plot.)
(In the end, this article was purely created by XP, and the writing style is poor for the first time.)
Reader comments
I won't mention the characters here. Incomplete characters will always be a slap in the face no matter how you write them, so I only mention the issue of writing. I have read four or five chapters, and I don't know if the author has read it from beginning to end. The whole article is full of large-scale character dialogues, and there is almost no description of the psychological environment and action. Rather than saying it is a novel, this writing method is more like a drama. There is not enough external foil description support. Relying entirely on language description is very watery and difficult to promote the details, because you cannot and will not complete all the guidance perfectly with pure language.
If you are writing a plot for a game, it is okay to write like this. You only need to deal with certain changes in details. However, if you are writing a novel, the readers are not looking at it directly. You cannot ask each reader to press a TV in their mind instead of playing the article to play content other than talking. This is your biggest drawback and a fatal drawback. Few people will find this problem after reading a few chapters and still continue reading without the author able to improve the problem.
Good looking, but a little short
Although, author, why do you just write the plot line? I doubt your word count
Fine. Few people write
How should I put it? When I read it, I felt as if I had gone through the plot again. I felt that except for the beginning and very few places, the protagonist had no sense of existence.
I won't mention the characters here. Incomplete characters will always be a slap in the face no matter how you write them, so I only mention the issue of writing. I have read four or five chapters, and I don't know if the author has read it from beginning to end. The whole article is full of large-scale character dialogues, and there is almost no description of the psychological environment and action. Rather than saying it is a novel, this writing method is more like a drama. There is not enough external foil description support. Relying entirely on language description is very watery and difficult to promote the details, because you cannot and will not complete all the guidance perfectly with pure language. If you are writing a plot for a game, it is okay to write like this. You only need to deal with certain changes in details. However, if you are writing a novel, the readers are not looking at it directly. You cannot ask each reader to press a TV in their mind instead of playing the article to play content other than talking. This is your biggest drawback and a fatal drawback. Few people will find this problem after reading a few chapters and still continue reading without the author able to improve the problem.
Good looking, but a little short Although, author, why do you just write the plot line? I doubt your word count
Fine. Few people write
How should I put it? When I read it, I felt as if I had gone through the plot again. I felt that except for the beginning and very few places, the protagonist had no sense of existence.
Basically it's all plot [laughs awkwardly]
I'm really sorry