Martial God: Heavenly Stems and Earthly Branches, Boundless Divine Powers

So far, the reading experience is quite good, but there are too few words, which is not enough to read. The author hurriedly updated it!

To be honest, the writing style is good, the setting is even better, it is very good in Tomato, and the characters are even more likeable, but there are too many text, which greatly affects the reading experience. Can the dialogue be reduced? There are too many dialogues between the supporting characters, which are meaningless. A few sentences can set off and highlight the protagonist. The long chapters in one chapter are all meaningless. It is really annoying to watch.

The characters are described well, and their actions are in line with their own personalities. They are not brainless. It is a good book, very good. Such books are rare in Tomato, but the author himself is too short, and the past few books are not long. I don't know what this one will be like. I really hope you will continue to write it well and make it a long one. If it doesn't collapse, it will be a masterpiece! Come on! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I've only read half of it, and I can't help but give you a five-star review. The author must be over 30 and has extremely rich social experience. I wish I could meet him. The logic of the novel is clear and reasonable, and the image of the strong man is deeply portrayed. Come on. I can't help but ask, is there a group?

I didn't watch it for long, but the plot was still good. The main psychological activities are actually too much, and the advancement of the plot, including the description of some plot details, is actually not quite in place. It just feels like this is the psychological journey of the protagonist, and the plot is just a tool to promote his psychological journey. The protagonist's caution is never reflected in his mental journey, but in what he does. However, many readers like this cautious style and will get angry if there is any rashness. I don't know if the author is affected by this, so he has to write a long paragraph of psychological activities to explain that the protagonist is a cautious and steady person. If the authors can adjust to each other, find a compromise. This novel should be better than it is now.

I can only say that it was okay. There was too much foreshadowing, which made it seem cumbersome. The characters are relatively fixed and can be changed appropriately. The plot connection is quite smooth. I can only say that if you follow the author's ideas, it is actually okay.

The writing is good and the plot is also very good. The only drawback is that every time I encounter something, I have to write 800 words of my experience first.

This book is neither slow-burning nor watery; it is truly "detailed". It's so "detailed" that it's not like a book I can find on Tomato. This book contains a lot of psychological descriptions of the male protagonist, as well as descriptions of the environment and other people. This is actually very risky. Because on the one hand, this does cause the entire plot to advance slowly, but on the other hand, it also causes the protagonist's character to be very three-dimensional and vivid, rather than a collection of settings. It can only be said that the author has a pursuit and is truly carving out the world and the male protagonist stroke by stroke. Basically everything is logical, every action of every character is justified, and every reversal is traceable. What a great book!

The book is still good, but there are some things that the author doesn't need to write in detail, such as the main character's reasons for acting this way, his inner activities, and the like. Sometimes these are not needed and are left to the readers to analyze by themselves, which will make the whole story smoother. To put it simply, if the protagonist takes action directly, readers will naturally feel that it is good and the killing is decisive. However, if the author also writes out the reasons, thoughts, and changes in mentality, there will be an extra paragraph of content that can be read or not. It is quite uncomfortable to have this reading experience and emotional accumulation interrupted. I haven't seen much so far, I don't know if it will be better in the future, I look forward to it!

The best character in this book is the protagonist's sister. Although the author has tried his best to make her as annoying as possible, the real sister is strong-willed in martial arts, pleases her parents at home, mixes in society with a low-profile outside, and has a younger brother who floats around when she has time to find a good job. She is the only one in this world.