The Grave Robbers' Chronicles: Let's Seal the Star Core Together

How can I put it, the theme is very novel, but there are too many soft and cute descriptions of the male protagonist, such as golden vertical pupils and tearful eyes. These descriptions are too frequent, as if they deliberately portray the male protagonist as a silly sweetheart who can only act cute. Moreover, Wu Xie and the little brother behave very strangely, like three male protagonists trying to force one female protagonist (male protagonist), which is inexplicably ambiguous. In short, it is strange. Apart from these, other plots are quite good.

I can see that it's probably leaning towards all now, the writing is immature but still fluent. The main reason is that the linkage with Star Rail is very novel and interesting, and reading the text, it seems that the author intends to travel with the pen thief as a nameless guest (x) in the future? Well, I came here after Dan Heng. Although I couldn't find it when I wanted to read a tomb robbing novel, I read it since this is also my favorite genre. Let me ask the author whether the cp for this article was chosen from stolen pens? Is Star Iron simply linked or can it also be knocked? But I feel like I have once again achieved the achievement of "competing against the background of unpopular cp in comprehensive and composite articles"... Hey, Mr. Dan Heng, your article is so hard to find!

An An is very cute. Although I can see that the author tried hard to write An An and the little brother in an ambiguous direction, my mind is filled with the touching love between father and son... I can't get enough of it at all. There is a bit of Shura Field (?) Rivalry between Xiao Ge and Wu Xie. The author probably wants to write that they both want to monopolize An Miao? I still hope they can be a close iron triangle (whisper) and the love they put in for each other is really touching. Certainly! You can just write what you think, I'm just telling you what I think (nod) Will the people on the train get off later? It's a pity that Xingtie is just a background version of the character. I hope I can meet Zaizai's friends in Luofu. I hope An An's CP can be from the Star Dome, and An Zai can go and see the bigger world (Quietly) It would be great if the cp is Dan Da, dragons and dragons hook up with each other and hook up with each other hey hey hey (saliva) (brain 10,000 words) It's also a good idea to go to the universe and follow the train development to have a laugh, have fun and have a happy adventure. But the biggest hope is that Shen Jinan's life is a colorful and happy life.

It's my favorite style. Please cp is a little brother

An An is very cute and innocent, but he doesn't understand that the time period An An returned to is not his time period, so why do his parents know that An An is their child? According to the normal time period, An An may still be a child, or not yet born, so why do his parents know that An An is their son?

Very well written [eating melon] I just want to ask if the train crew will get off the train and play together? If the main text doesn't work, can the extras work? [Sending Hearts]

It's okay, the writing style is relatively new, but I'm a bitch, hehehe, I just like to watch sucking ~ I still want to see the interaction with the blind man, I feel the sexual tension is full hahahahahahaha

Looks good! ! ! I'm very curious when they discovered An An's dragon horns and tail [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Ouch! Ouch! Finally someone wrote something spicy! Looks good! A small suggestion to the author: write a little less description of An An's expression. I like to read posts, but is this... A bit too... Um... Dense? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very beautiful, keep it up