The Villain Chosen by Fate: After the Engagement Is Broken, the Goddess Begs for Forgiveness

Although I know it's to advance the plot, but to be honest, those three people are so disgusting.

A book about the Son of Destiny that contains the name of the villain, but it is clearly the Son of Destiny and is pretended to be the villain, =_= The sea is all water

Negative review, the skills are suitable for villains, but they are a bit messy. The first time I received the system reward, I got a god-level skill called "Zuo Yi Gong". The second time I received the reward, a god-level skill, "Zuo Ji Yi Gong" disappeared. As a result, I fought alone with the Son of Luck and the villain received the Mirror-Breaking Pill. The level improvement was still the same as the previous one. After I checked my attributes after going home, I still didn't see the god level skill "Zuo Ji Gong". The writing was too messy and messy.

It's annoying to watch. It's been more than 50 chapters and the Son of Luck hasn't died yet. How can he be the villain and protagonist?

To be honest, I'm too lazy to give it even one star. Just take a look at the first eight chapters. What the hell, Wuling Poison breaks through twice, Jiyi Zizigong is gone, and Tianpin Lingyu becomes level nine! The plot is good, but the content is contradictory and confusing.

Stitched but not completely stitched, it doesn't matter what the realm name is, just copy it! The most important thing is that the entire fucking text is basically full of typos, but I'm still convinced that the timeline is too messy, so I'm sorry. The storyline is full of loopholes. For example, the eighth-level alchemist was interspersed with characters but the reason was too bad. Tell me if he is an alchemist or a high-level alchemist in your book. He can be said to have embezzled precious medicinal materials. What is his brain circuit for embezzling the elixirs of frontline soldiers? The ninth-grade stuff that the soldiers were eating was an elixir. Didn't they say it was discounted? Picture what. In addition, reducing intelligence is not mentioned in the whole book, but everyone has no IQ. Is it embarrassing that the Bai family leader is still obsessed with self-confidence even if his heart is dead? You're complaining about "waste" again, but you're just jealous of Shuitudou's peak

Great author, come on

Not very good-looking [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

There are too many typos, and it's really outrageous that an old man can force his wits. How can you be a fool if you practice to that level? This villain is more like the Son of Destiny than the Son of Destiny, and he is almost as good as Long Aotian Shuangwen

It's too confusing. There are many points that I don't recommend reading. Elementary school students can read it. Junior high school students and above will probably find it difficult to read.