Dark Zone: I'm A Jia, Leader of the Squad

_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_I think I should be considered someone who has read it for a long time. If you just read it as a dark zone article, you may not be so familiar with it. However, what the author has abandoned is the obstacles of the Dark Zone Breakout game, and instead presents a display and association of the real status quo of the Carmona world. What really surprises me is the author's control of the personalities of different characters - some have clear love and hate, some are decisive in killing, some are strategic, have courage, and the necessary humor. As a fan fiction author, the books I write are very shallow and pan-entertainment, while Lao Mao's books are more like traditional strategy articles, realistically depicting battles and strategic competitions. This is what I am lacking too. I believe that from this book, I can see the talent of Lao Mao. Even if no one appreciates this excellent debut novel, one day, he will be seen by more people. So, start with this book and get to know this excellent author.

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I have read one chapter and the introduction. The first one is also very good. It is the material of a good book. As long as the author completes the following two points, this book will be guaranteed to get 9 points. The first point: the content is exciting and novel in orthopedics. It is neither unfinished nor digressive, neither clumsy nor arrogant. The character portrayal is not out of tune The second point: (This is the most important point, many authors fail at this step) More than 5 chapters are updated daily, and the number of chapters is 3,000 [laughing] I also found out after reading the table of contents that the author has now written 25 chapters, but if some of the 681,000 are divided into 2,000 words each, the author has now written 45 chapters. If the author can write a few more chapters, he can at least start with 70 chapters. If he touches the water a few times, it will not be tens, but hundreds. It can be seen that the author does not think about water very much (at least now)

Well, the psychological details of the characters are described very well. Although I only wrote 5 chapters, it seems that the plot should still be good. In short, it is worth a try.

This novel is quite good. To be honest, except for the fact that Renoye is a bit broken, the rest of it is pretty good. It doesn't overestimate the protagonist, which is okay, and it's not a mindless novel. I think the author can add a heroine, but don't turn it into a love story if there is a heroine. The heroine can be someone who has traveled through time or is local to Carmona. But you have already written more than 80 chapters, and you haven't given any foreshadowing about the heroine before, so I suggest that you meet the heroine by chance. The heroine is some kind of killer who comes to assassinate Xiao Jia or to gather information. Then, the two people bump into each other. At that time, the heroine was seriously injured, and Xiao Jia rescued him. After that, the two got to know each other, and then developed a relationship. This is Carmona's. If you travel to the past, then take Xiao Jia's classmates back to normal life and return to real life by some means. Anyway, as you push the plot further, Xiao Jia and Dos's gang of Xiao Jia classmates will definitely recognize each other. This is for sure. It will be a good ending to let them return to reality by then.

Gaga is beautiful, the content is novel and the characters are very individual.

The writing is good and worth recommending

Highly recommended! ! ! ! It's really unsavory

It can be said to be a good book in the dark zone, but it's a pity that the updates are too slow and the updates are discontinued.

Will the male protagonist betray Renault later?