A time-traveling visitor comes to the world of Naruto twice in a row. What kind of story will happen to him here?
This is my first time writing a novel, so I hope I won't let myself down.
Reader comments
Why didn't Carrot choose to transform into the Super Saiyan form? If so, fewer people would watch it, because Super Saiyan is the most successful setting of Dragon Ball. If there were no Super Saiyan, would Dragon Ball still be Dragon Ball? Without Super Saiyan, Dragon Ball has no soul.
I really enjoy watching it now, I hope you can update it soon. I hope there won't be a big hole dug in the future, just like that little iron fist that looked down on the security guard. It's pretty good-looking at the beginning, but then it digs holes in the royal system, and then it's quite disgusting, and I don't want to watch it. I hope you won't let me down! Come on, author!
Do you dare to be more consistent and update twice a day? If not, leave a review and we will help you persuade you to quit.
The writing is good, but sometimes Kakashi, sometimes Carrot, sometimes Kakashi, sometimes Carrot tmm d makes me confused. If you don't change, I will kick you away.
I hope the author is great, don't mess up and support you [like][like][like]
Naruto + Dragon Ball! ! ! Sbarasi
I just like reading books about Naruto Saiyan.
It's well written, I just hope my combat power doesn't collapse too early
It looks good, I love watching it, I update it quickly, I can't sleep at night... Hehehehehehehehe
By increasing the amount of chakra, the cells of ordinary Senju clan members can also be increased several times.
It's very good and creative. I hope you can continue to enjoy writing.
Not bad, let's talk about Saiyan's explosive energy and why Sai and Sai San didn't reach the end and shouldn't become gods, and then.
The last star is because there are too many typos
The author works hard, come on
The plot is compact and no character is left behind.
Not bad, looks pretty cool
Isn't that Kushina? Why did she become Shinkuna?
I haven't seen the author for several days.
The author also writes about secret love, and also writes that the male protagonist does not want to get married, so what is this for? ? Make up the words? If there is no heroine, there will always be no heroine. This whole situation is half-existent and half-absent, which is very awkward.
Okay, okay, it feels pretty good and suits my taste
There is also a book in which Kakashi's brother plays the role of Gojo Satoru. The content is similar.
It feels like qi and chakra are similar things. There really is no difference. They are both life energy, but the use of chakra is more precise [rolls eyes]
Pretty good, just a little missing
Except that the update is too slow, there is nothing wrong with it, except Banana! Hair! Sick!
Good, good, good, good
Come on, stop being a pigeon
Not bad, double chefs are ecstatic
The protagonist's appearance is a bit sparse, it would be better if there were more scenes
Why didn't Carrot choose to transform into the Super Saiyan form? If so, fewer people would watch it, because Super Saiyan is the most successful setting of Dragon Ball. If there were no Super Saiyan, would Dragon Ball still be Dragon Ball? Without Super Saiyan, Dragon Ball has no soul.
I really enjoy watching it now, I hope you can update it soon. I hope there won't be a big hole dug in the future, just like that little iron fist that looked down on the security guard. It's pretty good-looking at the beginning, but then it digs holes in the royal system, and then it's quite disgusting, and I don't want to watch it. I hope you won't let me down! Come on, author!
Do you dare to be more consistent and update twice a day? If not, leave a review and we will help you persuade you to quit.
The writing is good, but sometimes Kakashi, sometimes Carrot, sometimes Kakashi, sometimes Carrot tmm d makes me confused. If you don't change, I will kick you away.
I hope the author is great, don't mess up and support you [like][like][like]
Naruto + Dragon Ball! ! ! Sbarasi
I just like reading books about Naruto Saiyan.
It's well written, I just hope my combat power doesn't collapse too early
It looks good, I love watching it, I update it quickly, I can't sleep at night... Hehehehehehehehe
Not bad! A rare Naruto novel!
Akira Toriyama passed away, mourning
Like, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise.
By increasing the amount of chakra, the cells of ordinary Senju clan members can also be increased several times.
It's very good and creative. I hope you can continue to enjoy writing.
Not bad, let's talk about Saiyan's explosive energy and why Sai and Sai San didn't reach the end and shouldn't become gods, and then.
The last star is because there are too many typos
The author works hard, come on
The plot is compact and no character is left behind.
Not bad, looks pretty cool
Isn't that Kushina? Why did she become Shinkuna?
I haven't seen the author for several days. The author also writes about secret love, and also writes that the male protagonist does not want to get married, so what is this for? ? Make up the words? If there is no heroine, there will always be no heroine. This whole situation is half-existent and half-absent, which is very awkward.
Okay, okay, it feels pretty good and suits my taste
There is also a book in which Kakashi's brother plays the role of Gojo Satoru. The content is similar.
It feels like qi and chakra are similar things. There really is no difference. They are both life energy, but the use of chakra is more precise [rolls eyes]
Pretty good, just a little missing
Except that the update is too slow, there is nothing wrong with it, except Banana! Hair! Sick!
Good, good, good, good
Come on, stop being a pigeon
Not bad, double chefs are ecstatic
The protagonist's appearance is a bit sparse, it would be better if there were more scenes