Shocking! Is This Really the Primordial World?

It feels a bit strange. It is written with a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west.

It is not easy to write a book. I give you five stars to encourage you. But your book is really not good. I read about 10 pieces of it. It's a mess. The strength jumps too fast. I can't understand the fighting plot in it. It ends before I know what happened. There is no detail at all. The characters are just like children.

Lots of typos.

The writing is incomprehensible, the preface does not match the subtitles All saints cultivate themselves and have systems... Then he forcibly broke off the relationship with the heroine, and then said that his previous life was over a hundred years ago, what kind of plot, it was all messed up

The idea is quite good, but the writing style is a little bad. It feels very confusing. The two stories are suddenly added together and I can't understand it. I don't even know what world you wrote about.

Come on, I wish you success

I can't understand. I can't understand.

The first few pages are pretty good, but why are they all so messed up later on?

There's nothing bad about it, but it's too messy. It's okay to sort out the outline from left to right.

To be honest, it's a bit confusing and confusing