The Real Heiress Delivers Face-Slapping Every Day

Neither the male or female protagonist is a love brain! The emotional line is not clear at the beginning of this article, and there will be a story about the hero and heroine when they were young. Although it is a surprise to meet again after a long separation, for the male and female protagonists, they are more capable of restraining their emotions. After all, they are bosses, so it is taboo to reveal their emotions too easily! And I think the relationship between Shen Ning and Qi Yanshu is not just about love, but more about helping each other and finally meeting at the top. As for the male supporting actors, they are all very good, so I also hope that they can have their own halo. Every character is alive, and I hope that the title of "male protagonist" will not obscure their excellence. The main text focuses on a plot, and the emotional line will be written in the extra chapter! I hope you all like this setting! I will try my best to correct any shortcomings! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] This book ends here, see you in the next one! The extra requires more than 10,000 readers to open it, which is a pity!

Um. . How can I put it this way? I just feel that the writing is a bit immature and the plot behind it is a bit rushed. There is basically no emotional connection between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. The second female protagonist is also a bit conflicted. There is also the genetic modification. The preface and afterwords of the second half are not consistent and the ending of the villain is not explained. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

There is no emotional line. Mainland China is about the plot, and the male and female protagonists have known each other since childhood and like each other, but they really can't tell. Maybe only the male protagonist can see it a little bit. The female protagonist really can't tell at all that he likes the male protagonist. Anyway, the emotional line is very strong. Like this kind of meeting after a long separation and still liking each other, the emotional line should not be so flat. Not only that. Many of the male supporting characters look a bit like the male protagonist. Basically, these male supporting characters are the standard ones for the male protagonist. Looking at it this way, I don't even know who the male protagonist is.

What are you writing about? I'm so depressed. If you don't want to write, just stop writing.

Looks good!

It's very imaginative. The only downside is that the emotional line is not very clear and the ending is a bit rushed.