Lying Flat in Infinite Worlds with the Shan Hai System

I've read about twenty chapters, and it's quite interesting, but a bit... Well, how should I put it, even the protagonist's role is too little! The copy is not very long to begin with, and there are too many descriptions of teammates. Xiao Yazi's presence is more like a passerby [a big boss among his teammates] [there are not many descriptions of the appearance of the vest]. Maybe it's because the hook is a bit big from the beginning, and it's not easy to write? Also, I feel that my wife is not very good at describing the thriller world view. The copy is relatively bland, and the plot advancement relies entirely on dialogue. There are not many foreshadowings and twists, and there is no scary atmosphere. [Perhaps my wife also wants to write a copy that is less scary and supernatural. (But it's not funny either!)] It's all about push-ups, and the large area of ​​text describing the teammates' efforts to break the game seems very... Well, funny? In other words, it's all in vain. Anyway, in the end it's the protagonist who ends up finishing. Of course, it's possible that I'm too impatient, and my teammates also need to grow step by step. So my wife can add more depth to her teammates, give more highlights, and give the protagonist more roles, Xiao Yazi is obviously so cute! The small system is also very cute!

Just gone? ! ! ! ! ! ! So short! ! Although the ending is very good and the blank space is also very good, is there not even an extra chapter? ? Is it over? ! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo…

It's very beautiful. It's not what I like very much, but the author, are you a bit short? Well, you have to know that you are a newcomer and you have to have a newcomer's attitude. Why not write quickly?

It's pretty good to watch. There are no flaws except for the sudden ending.

It's pretty good to watch, but it feels like it ends quite suddenly, as if it's never finished! I still want to continue watching!

It's good-looking and interesting. The male protagonist should be able to wear a lot of vests.

It's beautiful. The author's crazy words in big letters hit me hard.

It looks good, but I feel like there are a lot of settings that haven't been written.

Nice! ! Well, how should I put it? Although I have finished reading it, I still have a feeling that I am still unfinished, and I really want to continue reading it!

I like the non-CP good-looking, relaxed and refreshing text, take a sip of fluff (≧▽≦)