
Naruto: This Naruto Wants to Build a Mecha
火影:这个鸣人想要开机甲
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- Completed
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- 578k Words
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- Unknown
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- 2y ago
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It's super cool. Isn't it better to write about Sasuke's gay relationship and how to write about brotherhood while being gay?
The subject matter is very novel. I hope the author can keep writing. If he keeps writing, he might be able to surpass Dave!
It's very interesting to watch, and it's really fun to watch Naruto cheat. Whether it's cooking or inventing, he has taken a completely different path, and his style is more relaxed. But when I saw Danzo acting as Hokage, I felt a little bit unmotivated. After all, without him taking the blame, I felt that I had no motivation. Also, Naruto's performance was not very proportional to the results of his efforts. There was a bit of a gap. With so many achievements and inventions, it shouldn't be so laborious to defeat Orochimaru. Even without Gundam, the many derivative scientific and technological achievements of one product are amazing. There is a sense of separation between Naruto's learning ability and practical spirit, because according to the setting of this book, Naruto carefully studied the nature of chakra and various ninjutsu in the ninja school, and actively practiced it, but it was strange that he didn't know how to climb trees and tread water after graduation. Another thing is that compared with other Naruto fans, it is a pity that it does not influence partners to join in the common progress of science. Of course, all of this is innocuous in general. This book is still an excellent and enjoyable book, and I enjoyed reading it. It's just a pity that it could be better.
It is very good and very similar to a book I read before. (Naruto: Naruto said that I am not a homebody. It has been removed from the shelf, but you can find it in my bookshelf, in the discontinued column. If you want to read it, you can look for it.) But that book has been discontinued. I hope the author can stick to it.
Very exciting ideas, and the writing style is also good. It's just that I don't know where the author studied? This fragmentation method of yours? Um. Can you give me your home address? I'll send you some souvenirs here to reward you [angry]
The alternative Naruto is so interesting. The author's ideas and writing techniques are particularly beautiful. So far, I can't see any shortcomings. The word count is long enough, the updates are fast enough, and it also retains the original innocence of the celebrity. Okay, I'll just think about it for now. I'll comment later if I have any thoughts.
The updates for more than half a month are all about Sasuke's plot. I really don't like the plot of the two pillars. When will the two young lovers successfully meet or cure each other's illness? I really don't have the patience to watch it and let me have a good time. It is really painful to follow the update. I put a punctuation here. I hope some kind people will kick me when the Sasuke plot is over. I will watch it again then.
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The language of the full text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. The emotions are rich and true, and it is enjoyable to read. The structure is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The language is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people's blood boil and their hearts surge when reading it. The content is novel, the idea is wonderful, and the language is vivid and lively. The fresh breath of life is revealed between the lines.
This book can definitely be ranked in the top 10 of the best books on Naruto at that time. There were many authors of good books on Naruto at that time, but this book can still occupy a place and it is very awesome.