The Lie-Flat Immortal Emperor's Apocalypse Routine

Single heroine or multiple heroines? @ManWeiYang

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wumei for 13 years, Ye Bi waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Ling for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Khanxian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yushu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a young man was lying weakly on the bed. His face was pale, but the corners of his mouth were trembling slightly. Tears shone in the corners of his eyes. His hoarse voice mocked: "Don't forget to update..." The author should update quickly, the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

First of all, the content of this book is okay, but there are also many places that are not very good. I feel that there is more room for development. Firstly: in the subsequent plot, I can only say that there are no fighting scenes at all. Besides, there are Yuanshen above the Yuanying. As a result, you can directly deal with the Yuanshen. No more; secondly: Hedao and the like are all old monsters, and they will definitely have backhands, but in your plot, I only saw one blood demon with backhands, and none of the other Nascent Souls have any backhands; thirdly: the fights in the plot feel like street gangsters fighting, It's all about close combat. Come on, you've become immortals. Who can fight in close quarters? Don't make Yuanying, Huashen, Lianxu, and Hedao so weak. It's as easy as chopping a watermelon. Fourth: Why are there so many women in the subsequent plot? Their relationship is a bit like that of the male protagonist. It's the same as focusing on these women, and it hasn't been stated whether there is a heroine in this novel. Although there are relatively few updates, the plot content at least gives readers some surprises. That's all I want to say, but I don't know if the author can see it. That's another matter.

The question type is good. The protagonist should be given something to do and not be a babysitter all the time [face covering] Come on, author! From 500 people to 5,000 [Sending Hearts]

I feel that the plot is pretty good, but there is no such thing as making talismans or refining weapons in cultivating immortals. I hope the author can work harder. I feel that the plot is too dragging, there are too many supporting characters, and the main plot is too dragging. I frequently skip a few chapters without feeling any gaps in the plot. I have to say that after reading more than a hundred chapters, there is no substantial progress in the plot. The protagonist is truly invincible, and it doesn't feel right.

I don't know why the rating is so low. This book can definitely be rated above nine points. Many details are handled very well and thoughtfully. The writing style is a little bit simple but it is still exciting. The logic of the article is also very open and there are many branch lines interspersed. I have read it for more than ten years and I don't think this novel is not good. I just feel that the subject matter is novel and logical and the protagonist is not as brainless as a normal online novel. The supporting characters are basically brainless, which can create the feeling of straightforward struggle. It is really good to read. I recommend it.

Very good, there is no deliberate darkness, nor does the protagonist do whatever he wants just because he is invincible. Every child of luck has a bottom line and can restrain his desires. He will not do whatever he wants because of his past life experiences or the system. Instead, he can shoulder his own responsibilities. This is highly praised. The heroine's portrayal of Xiao Ling'er was sometimes too unreasonable, so some points were deducted. Jiang Jingya was unfortunately a bit of a passerby, but Cui Wanwan did a good job. And the overall ending and conclusion are also handled very well. Overall, it is a rare apocalyptic novel with a normal protagonist's three views. The total score is 10 points. I personally think it will be 9 points. The deduction points are: 1. There are not enough apocalyptic scenes and the ending is a bit hasty, so 0.5 Points will be deducted. 2. Jiang Jingya has less scenes in the later stage, and Xiao Linger can be a bit naughty sometimes, so 0.5 Points will be deducted.

It's okay, the subject matter is novel, and the plot arrangement is okay. To be honest, it's really well written. The score is so low just because some parts of the plot are a little stained + unfinished. In fact, it's not unfinished. It can be called the end of the apocalypse and the end of the human world. I hope to see the author's second book about the fairy world in my lifetime, and I also hope to see Xiao Ling'er call Jiangliu "Master" again.

Why is the score so low? The multi-line narrative is very good. The supporting actors in the front are really well written. Anyway, I think it is a very novel way of writing. I hope to continue writing a second game. There are many pitfalls that have not been filled. I strongly support it.

The protagonist should not be a reborn person. If he is reborn in the main world, travels through time, and has the system, there should not be two of them. One of them said that the skills previously passed on to Jizhen's grandfather were created by him when he was young. However, according to the timeline, the protagonist's memory has just traveled through time and the skills were available many years before he traveled through time. So there are only two possibilities. 1: After he became the Immortal Emperor, he was wiped out by a stronger person and then reborn, so he didn't know. 2: He was not reborn. His golden finger gained the memory of the Immortal Emperor. This also explains why his mental power was so weak in the early stage, which made him doubtful, because he was not reborn at all.