Star Dome: My Disciple Jingliu Keeps Trying to Defy Me
星穹：我家徒儿镜流总想欺师犯上
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- 2y ago
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The writing is good, but... It's short and very cute [laughs evilly]
Do you think it's reasonable for an author to review his own book?
It's beautiful, but where is the author?
The plot is very simple. The protagonist picked up a girl, raised her, loved her, cared for her, and then died in front of her... And then a big boss was raised (buishi)
The writing is very good. It is rare to see this kind of writing in Star Iron fan fiction. The content is very exciting. The main reason is that the character of Kage-ryu is completely different from other fan fiction and games. I like it so much! ! ! ! Makes you want to raise her as a daughter~[Like] So, author, don't force me to kneel down and beg you, give you gifts, and urge you to update! I hope the author can update it steadily! [Please update]
Great, I am the dog of Jingliu and March 7th!
No, it's short, it's too short, it's not enough to read [angry] It's rare to find a book that I like to read so much. The author will update me as soon as possible.
Jiujiu, I am a huge fan of this book! I'm very honored. I've been reading this book for a long time. Although I can't be satisfied with everything, I think the author is great! This is one of the better novels about Star Iron in Tomato. Although you can still see the traces of Xiaobai, you can also see the author's transformation. This is the experience of a young author becoming an adult (乐) The main plot of this book in the early stage is from the ten years before Kyoryu became famous to the more than 180 years after he became famous. In the middle stage, I used Ai Kun Mo Yin as a clue, and in the later stage, I hastily fast-forwarded directly to the main line of the game. Maybe it's because I feel like I can't hold on to my writing power. In a word, this book is worth reading. Maybe you will see Jiujiu's wonderful comments? I would like to tell you my happy time with the above words. If this book has more than 500,000 words, the censor doctor Jiujiu will definitely express my heartfelt and emotional words in a thousand words. Jiujiu will not be stingy with his brain and wisdom when it comes to good books!
It's well written, and the author's cosplay is also very nice.
For a new author, the book is already good, at least it starts off well, but it lacks some details. It is simple and white at the beginning and slightly sweet at the end. It doesn't look that amazing. You can add more details. For example, by the end of the book, except for Dan Feng, Dan Heng has almost no connection with the pig's feet. You can also add some knives (the tomato man is passive and triggered again), Wuxiao Drinking the Moon Rebellion on the Cloud or The way for a person to help others cure the demonic yin is to transfer the demonic yin into his own body and then slash it with a sword in order to suppress the demonic yin. Or it can be written in a cute body mirror, which is more yandere, so that more people can see it. In addition, some other destructive armies can be added later to attack the fairy boat. Then the protagonist can't suppress the demonic yin and is slashed by passing through the underworld, causing the memory to be shattered and so on. All in all, the book is good, but it could have been longer [Love]