Creating Urban Legends in a Cyberpunk World

What I felt after reading Chapter 60 was that I kept killing the principal, and then denounced all the evils and darkness of society. Then a white-haired detective appeared and discovered the protagonist, but inexplicably died again after one chapter. I looked at the table of contents, and what seemed to happen next? I feel like the author of "The Strange Resurrection of the Holy Son" doesn't have an outline. I just write whatever comes to mind. I will continue to read it. I hope the author can make a good outline. The content in the front and back makes people look confused. The author has a good idea, but his writing skills are limited. I hope he can write the main content not so poorly.

It's too late. I haven't seen any weird stories yet. Apart from the toilet, I have to activate it myself every time I pass by. And I don't understand why the protagonist keeps fighting with the new principal. Why not just write down a good principal in notes and then control him? Instead, he has to come to the new principal all the time, deal with it, and then repeat the cycle 🤦

Those who were attracted by the introduction are good-looking, but let's just say, is it a little off topic? 🤦 And what about the protagonist's character? It's like playing hide-and-seek, but you jump out and yell a few times to tell others where you are? I don't want to attract attention in my thoughts, but I do the opposite in my behavior. In the past dozens of chapters, I have been targeting the newly appointed principals, killing them. Is the protagonist's nickname the Principal Killer? 😂

I don't know what will happen next, so I'll give it five stars first. Is the rating so low?

The author won't read it just because you and I are different sizes 😏😏😏

The introduction is deceptive, it's not cybernetic, it's not weird, it's just a small person's success. 🤮

The setting is good, but the classic force suppresses strength and intelligence. With the pen that can realize wishes and the possibility has been initially confirmed, instead of immediately asking for leave to go home to study its usage and functions and obtain extraordinary abilities, it instead spends time in school dealing with gangsters in the school. Is the knowledge and knowledge so low? So it is deliberately lowering intelligence and suppressing strength. The main plot is procrastinated, without any excitement at all, and a good setting is wasted.

In fact, to be honest, he wrote so slowly and didn't grasp the previous plot well, so I watched it. The more I watched the previous part, it was okay, the more I looked at the new principal, who came and who was fucked, how did I read the novel, the more I read, the more I felt suffocated. Isn't this any different from Golden Finger? If it can't bring benefits to the protagonist, what's the use of this golden finger?

The setting is good, but the writing is very slow and messy. It's the kind of 18-year-old aborigine who doesn't look like a time traveler at all. After all, I have lived for more than ten or twenty years, but why do I keep having diarrhea in school for the principal and vice-principal... It's disgusting and procrastinating. It's like fighting to the death in school

After reading Chapter 40, I feel that the writing is okay, but there are a few problems. First, what about urban legends? Chapter 40 is not out yet. Second, what about Cyber? Except for the same bad society as cyber society, there is no cyber style at all. Third, if the protagonist is caught and not released from school, when will a new map be opened? 🤦🤦🤦